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Forever Gone.

It happened when least expected.
You left us never to return.
You were loved by more than you knew.
Everyone was in some way effected.

You were the first friend,
That I had to go through losing.
We've had lots of fun times,
Who knew this would be the end?

You was more than just a friend,
You was another bro.
But we'll never hang out again,
It was way to soon for you to go.

We all loved you,
And it's hard not to cry.
We'll all miss you.
And this is my final goodbye.


By: Mike W.
"Rest In Peace Timmy"
(December 4, 1984 - June 4, 2006)

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Written June 7th, 2006

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  • Cidnie-ViLou90
    June 10, 2006
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    this is a great poem! It is so sad! It is really hard to lose a best friend, but at least you still have the memoriesof him and now he is in a better place. best wishes
    ~ashley marie~


  • Shannon62875
    June 8, 2006
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    aww this is really good Mike havent seen a new poem from you in a long ass time.. or seen any comments but i can kinda see why.. ill email ya after i email daniel.. talk to ya late.r. bye bye


  • Angel With No Halo
    June 8, 2006
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    How sweet is it that you wrote a tribute to your friend.Very sad.It is too bad. I am asuming he died in the war.If not well then he didn't.This war is just killing people for absolutely no reason.I am sorry for your loss.Keep your head up and know that he is at peace now.
    Many blessing and best wishes to you my soldier friend.

    Love
    ~Krys~


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    June 8, 2006
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    a touching tribute to a fallen comrade...the difficulty of losing a close friend is hard to imagine. A very strong piece, filled with both kindness and sorrow. Good friends are hard to find and harder to lose. Well done.
    Rory

  • dumbgothkid
    June 7, 2006
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    I'm almost cying that is really sad. I give you my sypathy and hope that you and all the others that knew your friend can be strong and learn to deal.

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