No matter the time that passes by,
no matter the pain that we endure
Life is full of gifts if we are
courageous and do not give up before
our life is meant to end
in its self-righteous way
Do not stand still and burn,
live on another day
For if I were to fail you now, my dear,
I do not know if I could cope
because I have already failed a special
spirit who had lost all his hope
Rest assured, I am here,
so please reach out to me
if you need a helping hand,
or just someone to help you see
that you are cherished and loved,
that you are appreciated by us
So stand before the stars of judgement
and refuse to let yourself be crushed
We are standing behind you every step of the way
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Written June 7th, 2006
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beautiful work once again. *sigh* I wish I was on before so I could talk to you. I've missed you sooooo much! Wonderful write.
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Very true. Some people just don't realize that, and they are the ones that lose out.
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it may be hard to win over, but it is priceless. there is no value that can be set upon honest love and friendship.
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One that's a little hard to win over, but huge nonetheless.
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this is beautiful hun very heartfelt and toouching with a very strength to it you have a huge heart my daughter
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Thank you.
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Nice rose! A poem of love and hope! I like it! What better a purpose in life than to be loved! Well done!
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Hopefully there won't be very many failures. Thank you for your comment.
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hope and love. how we are willing to face all opposition for love with another. truly commendable. u may fail at other things but as long as there is love, there is no failure too great to overcome it. good poem
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