Clouds clear the darkened sky
And moon full, comes to rise
I feel the burning deep inside
Your body hard, I want to ride
The scent of man calls my lust
Licking lips, have you, I must
I see you standing against a tree
I need to taste your ecstasy
Approaching fast, seductive strut
Prepared to make that tiny cut
My primal scent carries on the wind
Before long, I have you pinned
Wasting not one single moment
Show you my exact intent
With teeth bared, about to plunge
Towards your neck, I now lunge
Trace your throat with my tongue
To quickly find that you are sprung
I feel the pulsing in your vein
You bare your neck without complain
With caressing strokes, bite in deep
As crimson wine begins to seep
The taste, the scent, my soul's on fire
I drink in deep, all my desires
But baby, know I'll please you as well
(Yeah, as if you couldn't tell)
I suckle down across your chest
As mouth comes to nipple's rest
Flicking hard, you jump and twitch
First one nipple, then I switch
Your moans roar from deep within
Tongue trails further down your skin
Straight to your rocks of pleasure
Nip them soft, you start to shiver
Then wrap my mouth around your cock
As fast your body feels the shock
I drink in more, your musky taste
Your blood, your cum, none to waste
Devour hard, as you explode
Get ready love, you will be rode
Standing up, straddled hips
Pressed to my breast, your waiting lips
Slide down fast, upon your stick
My nipples hard, you suck and flick
Your teeth graze, sinking in
Crimson flows down your chin
Suck hard and fast, take me all
My intoxication has you enthralled
An overload of orgasmic surge
Deep within, our climaxes merge
Once sated, rest before dawn's rise
For when night calls again, you'll get your prize
Author notes
Ok, you wanted dark, you got dark, hardcore, and a little in between. Enjoy, 
Written June 7th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- "let there be dark" by freakazoid127.
300 points, ended August 8, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for the comments. Glad you enjoyed reading, hopefully as much as I did writing it. Appreciate it.
Storm -
::high five::
:: fans face:: damn, lol wow... that was... yeah. i liked this piece mostly because it wasnt just erotic, there was the whole blood exchange entwined in it and that made it all the more better. it made it undeniably sexy, for those of us with a taste for the mysterious fantasy of a vampiric lover. it was definitely well written and intriguing. great write, good luck, and thanks for entering!
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Thanks for the comments, I appreciate it.
Storm -
this poem is crazy, besides the cock sucking and the fucking, pardon my mouth.
but other than that me and my girlfriend can relate to that very detailed lol... thanks for teh memories of Grateful 1 lol..
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Hehe, thank you. Glad you liked.
Storm -
DAMN. That's hottttt!!!!
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Thank you for the comments, and the compliment. I appreciate it.
Storm -
I love it. I never used to like erotica but suddenly I have an interest in it. It takes a lot for someone to write about pleasure and really capture the essence of it, and you're quite good at it. Not many people can be this uninhibited either, so great job. Thank you for sharing and good luck!
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Thanks for reading and commenting. Many more like this, as erotic is my favorite type of writing. Glad you enjoyed.
Storm -
Just came across your page - we share many of the same interests. This is a great poem - very erotic. I will have to check out more of your works. Blessed be. . .
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Hot Damn! Tease me, please me, make me squeal!!! Ok soit was hot and so very pleasing. Now back to the showers.
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Thanks, I appreciate your comments. Probably got just as hot writing it. LOL
Storm -
OH MY! Whoa! That is so HOT! I think I need to cool myself down here. Crank the A/C and the fan. It is way too hot in here.
Heh, I love the way you have your dark and hardcore mixed well together. Ooooh, what a nice match!
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