...and then she fell.
Fighting a hopeless cause
She kept coming
She kept crawling
She kept hoping...
For anything at all.
Humanity erased her
Humanity replaced her
She was a hero...
But then she fell.
Monsters surround her
Inner demons capture her
Entrance her
She was a hero...
Now a white jacket envelopes her.
But she's still there:
Demons
Fire
Pain.
She's got to find the way
She's got to save the day
So she holds on for everything to change
For a life without demons
Without fire
Without pain.
But then,
...she fell.
Author notes
Just what came to mind when I saw the picture
Written June 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- Picture Contest #6- SILENT HILL HELP ME! by DarkenedAuras.
300 points, ended June 14, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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It has a wonderful flow to it. And the storyline is perfect. The beginning captures you and the ending leaves you longing for more. I love it
Great job
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Great write hunni! I love it! You've always been the best writer I know
hehe.
Much love and pixie dust!
Sara -
Very powerful write!! It sounds like someone went crazy...well i liked this, you did a great job, keep on writing!! _MuchLove2Ya_
-AmberLeigh- -
cool this was...odd but really neat, different approach then what I took although I have played all the games of Silent Hill so I know what the pictures are from the cutscenes in the game but your interpretation is really good...great poem good luck to you in my contest
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