Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

The Barn at Morning.

Nothing like the feel of your hand
holding mine.

Stepping through wet pasture grass
on the way

To the barn as another day in
our life

has begun.

Tack hanging against barn wood
jackets and

mud boots.
And the scent of the barn in morning.

This just feels right.

Author notes

editing....
Written June 7th, 2006

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Apparition
    June 24, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    It was nice, Henri, to see you posting again. I'm sure those
    times you spent with Jess are just as special to her. My daughters and I have taken up Geo-cacheing We've had some
    wonderful "girly" time together just treasure hunting. We've seen some beautiful sights, gotten kicked off the premesis a few times on night caches, and sometimes had some explaining to do when we're approached by security guards etc. But we have so much fun just sharing time and enjoying the moment and each other's company.

    No doubt your Jess will always hold those father-daughter times in a special place in her heart.

    Thanks for such a warm comment.

    Maddie
    Edited on Jun 24, 9:49 because 'spelling oops'.


  • ferg silver member
    June 11, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    Sweet memories

    Maddie,

    Thanks for your wonderful comment on my latest. Interestingly this last write of yours totally reminds me of my daughter Jess. She was a show jumper for many years and had several horses. We have spent many hours at the barn. Sometimes I'd just watch her ride or train her horse or we would be mucking out the stall and enjoying some amazing father daughter time that was both light and deeply profound at the same time. The scene you describe triggers many happy memories for me. Thanks for the reminders.
    Edited on Jun 15 because 'sp'.


  • leo2
    June 7, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Your love of horses is obvious in this one. I share your love of the morning as well. Your enigmatic author's notes have been sent to Army Intelligence Headquarters for analysis.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long