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Immortal Rivers Ever Flow

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Taste and touch the spirit here, glimpse into the depths of he
who spends his days in eagle’s claws, soaring above the earth to see
the verse within, the verse without, captured in a warrior’s heart
that issues forth from hand to pen, to burst and blaze, and then begins
a journey that will never end…


 

They speak of strength, strong and wise, courageous heart, searching eyes
touching lives and crossing paths, a dreamer never turning back
giving of his precious time, offering his respect and soul
sharing with his family close poetic treasures reaped and sowed
still echoing in the howling wind…


 

Immortal rivers ever flow through gifted muse, through dancing gaze
carrying words of melodies into our minds, to fill our days
with burning fires, pleasures erupt unto the she wolves playing near
mesmerized in fantasies more than breath and heart can bear
with secrets flickering deep within…


 

Through joy and pain, in radiant flame, in haunting ghosts of agony
reaching out with life's uncertain bittersweet poetry
from the shadows of the moon, to the sunrise' slanted rays
in lonely whispers in the nights to friendships warmed in sunlit days
with light and love you’ll be embraced.  


 

 


 

 

Author notes

a tribute woven from the tributes to Blazing White Wolf- that other dad!
Written June 7th, 2006

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  • wbiro gold member
    June 18, 2006
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    Well, thank you, Janet, or shall I say 'Smoochy'! Hmmm... getting warm in here...


  • Iohagh
    June 18, 2006
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    Darling Wbiro

    To lose to you is all the award and reward I need. Smoosh

    Janet


  • Saint Gut-Free
    June 18, 2006
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    This is a brilliant write, and shows such a lot of talent- right from the off; your rhythm is just so captivating. You can almost sense a drumbeat as you read through it. Your imagery is stunning; another piece creating such a vivid, gentle image. Blazing White Wolf must be so touched by this; as well he should be. I can only hope that one day I can be the poet to not only write like this; but to have such works written for me.
    great work, congrats on your trophy


  • raggyann
    June 13, 2006
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    what a truly beautiful write
    i love it
    thank you
    for sharing

  • wbiro gold member
    June 7, 2006
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    yes, I've tinkered with it already...

  • Theasp
    June 7, 2006
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    While my ego howls, his stands against nature

    The tidal ebb and flow in the patterns of your poetry has returned to the ignomatic writer I came to love. Thank you, for words that reach into the heart and touch my soul.


  • Celticmoon
    June 7, 2006
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    Oh my dear brother you have penned yet another poetic masterpiece to honor another. Your words of him speak loudly the truth within his heart and soul. I can see by his words he has enjoyed this piece very much and that is easily understood. Bravo!



  • Blazing White Wolf
    June 7, 2006
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    wow! wayne what a spendid write you have truly honored me and made me blush wow I am garced with such a spledid write yo have pened here thank you so very much and christina is such the most beautiful young woman I know why you love and care for her so much as do I again thank you
    love and light
    Blaze


  • lavender shadows
    June 7, 2006
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    Fantastic Dad! Awwwwwww, that's so sweet of you to write about my other Dad. You did just an amazing job on this! The entire poem is just so smooth and eloquent, and simply gorgeous! Thanks so much for entering!

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