Sun's sky is so beautiful.
How the blue sky is so heart loving.
Moon's stars are so bright and beautiful!
They both are so loving to me.
Author notes
I love the sky, both by day and by night.
Written June 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Happy Poems of all sorts by kids to age 13 by Periwinkle Blue.
550 points, ended January 4, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sweetly said and lovely, quite! I agree, yes, I do. Keeping me smiling, you are.
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Merry Meet-
I am glad you are in the favor of the Sky, both by Night and by Day! This was a short and to the point piece. Keep it up!
May your fangs stay sharp-
Bella
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Another very good poem by Leo 101! Keep up the writing! You are off to a very good start at All Poetry!
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