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love?

A love not yet embraced
One that I have not yet tasted
And yet I should know my expectations
On how my love should be?

No that is not right
For I first have to gather
All the feelings I could feel
And choose the ones I desire most

Then I need to know
How my love shall treat me,
If it is true love,
And is it meant to be.

I can not begin to know
What I really want in love
For I have not yet seen or felt
What true love is supposed to be

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Written June 6th, 2006

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  • crystallynnbradford
    June 7, 2006
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    This was very well written in the free verse style. I don't see a lot of poems that don't rhyme so this was a treat!