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A Better Day (haiku)

the coolness of the breeze
the rays of the sun
call for a better day

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Written June 6th, 2006

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 29, 2006
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    Very well done. Nice choice of wording and discriptive. Always look forward to tomorrow.

  • Wesside
    June 26, 2006
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    Great use of descriptive vocabulary. If only everyone saw tomorrow as an opportunity as opposed to a chore.

    Score: 8.9


  • individuality gold member
    June 10, 2006
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    and a better day it shall be then, i will go and chase it and hopefully catch it today spill ink and twist me into the shape of love...


  • Sumthinlifeish
    June 8, 2006
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    Like it! Like it a lot!
    ~ Wounded butterfly