v.1 As I sit here and stare at the moon,
All I can do is just think about you.
But the thoughts in my head are not what they seem
Because I'm asking myself... questioning myself these things;
ch. In those Hollywood movies how can they tell,
Everything is perfect and it all seems so swell
Love is always at first sight stuff just falls into place
But what do you do when the one you embrace
Doesn't give you the feeling they have
In those Hollywood movies
v.2 You tell them you love them again and again
You hug and you kiss and you dance in the wind
You don't understand why you don't feel the spark
That everyone tells you should be in your heart
ch. In those Hollywood movies how can they tell,
Everything is perfect and it all seems so swell
Love is always at first sight stuff just falls into place
But what do you do when the one you embrace
Doesn't give you the feeling they have
In those Hollywood movies
v.3 It tears at your mind and it hurts you so bad
cause you know how they feel but you can't feel it back
So all you can do is say I love you too
And deal with the fact that you know it's not true
ch. Like in those Hollywood movies where they always can tell,
Everything is perfect and it all seems so swell
Where love is always at first sight & stuff just falls into place
When you and your true love share an embrace
Oh I would give anything, anything at all
For the split second feeling you get in a Hollywood movie.
Author notes
I wrote this at 3:30 this morning (6/6/06) so please be honest and tell me what you think!
Written June 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Bring it on by RebelDLine75.
555 points, ended June 28, 2008, 36 entries
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This was gut wrentching, I'm not sure that was the intention but it's what I felt. I understand perfectly, a lot of people would kill for the fictional perfection that lights up our screens. That's the thing though, it's merely fiction. Best of luck in the contest!
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that is sooo true, and i just wish someone would write something like that about me (the always love me part)
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All be your superstar we'll have our movie Becuase i love you so much it will be like a hollywood movie!
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Cool Idea
I really like these lyrics they will make a wonderful song -
it sure has a good rythm.... i think that its a great lyric... congrats
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