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Hollywood Movies

v.1  As I sit here and stare at the moon,
    All I can do is just think about you.

    But the thoughts in my head are not what they seem
    Because I'm asking myself... questioning myself these things;

ch.  In those Hollywood movies how can they tell,
    Everything is perfect and it all seems so swell

    Love is always at first sight stuff just falls into place
    But what do you do when the one you embrace

    Doesn't give you the feeling they have
    In those Hollywood movies

v.2  You tell them you love them again and again
    You hug and you kiss and you dance in the wind

    You don't understand why you don't feel the spark
    That everyone tells you should be in your heart

ch.  In those Hollywood movies how can they tell,
    Everything is perfect and it all seems so swell

    Love is always at first sight stuff just falls into place
    But what do you do when the one you embrace

    Doesn't give you the feeling they have
    In those Hollywood movies

v.3  It tears at your mind and it hurts you so bad
    cause you know how they feel but you can't feel it back

    So all you can do is say I love you too
    And deal with the fact that you know it's not true

ch.  Like in those Hollywood movies where they always can tell,
    Everything is perfect and it all seems so swell

    Where love is always at first sight & stuff just falls into place
    When you and your true love share an embrace

    Oh I would give anything, anything at all
    For the split second feeling you get in a Hollywood movie.

Author notes

I wrote this at 3:30 this morning (6/6/06) so please be honest and tell me what you think!
Written June 6th, 2006

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  • Nothing But No
    May 29, 2008
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    This was gut wrentching, I'm not sure that was the intention but it's what I felt. I understand perfectly, a lot of people would kill for the fictional perfection that lights up our screens. That's the thing though, it's merely fiction. Best of luck in the contest!


  • luvles-unwantd-losr
    September 24, 2006
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    that is sooo true, and i just wish someone would write something like that about me (the always love me part)

  • Mejustme
    September 22, 2006
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    All be your superstar we'll have our movie Becuase i love you so much it will be like a hollywood movie!


  • Da-Lyricologist
    June 7, 2006
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    Cool Idea

    I really like these lyrics they will make a wonderful song

  • Spifferus
    June 7, 2006
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    it sure has a good rythm.... i think that its a great lyric... congrats

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