You were so different back then, dad
You acted like you didn't care
You said you didn't want me
But you were just scared,
Now that I am older
You want to learn more about me
You say you don't want me to be like you
But I am more like you than you know, dad
I have your hair,
Soft to the touch
I have your eyes,
So brilent and yet beautiful,
And I have your temper
But I also have your smile
But no matter what happens
Or how old I get
I will always love you dad...
Author notes
Ya that was bout my dad....I loves him lots but when i was littler he was never there for me and now hes always there for me...But ya...
Written June 5th, 2006
#3 in the contest....
A contest entry
- Family....The good bits and the bad by Dreams27.
500 points, ended June 3, 2007, 14 entries
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a very good write, my dad was never there for me when i was younger either...hes still not, but things are beginning to pick up. this was a nicely written poem expressing your emotions well. thank you for the entry! take care, sam (Dreams27) xxx
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i love it kayla its really goods!~!!!
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I really liked this poem.I know exactly how you feel. Check out my poem"Father"by luvpoems 30.
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I like it Kayla..<3 Great job, liked the form...
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