place my heart on a silver plate
walk with you to heaven,through the whitened gate.
i need you here, now and always
helping me keep up the sun all day long
so the rain doesn't come in and turn our days all wrong
you showed me the stars and all there glory
how it made life seem for once it was okay
promising that not matter how grey, you'd never be far away.
I gave you my treasures, my heart and gold
never felt as high as i did, i swear i could soar.
fighting through brunch about who loved each other more.
We waited for the bus, that would pick us up and take us home
somewhere where we could finally belong, oh how we waited for so long.
i could Stand on two feet holding onto you, i'd never felt this strong.
Spent every waking minute with one another, couldn't be happier.
Loved you all day long 7 days a week, the little dimples on your cheek.
how they could make me smile when i felt so weak.
because I'm broken, yeah i won't lie
it's the truth, so please help me through
because I'm in need of a heart that's extremely brand new.
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i finished it.
Written June 5th, 2006
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Everyones been there. youll get better
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Please, check your grammer! I counted quite a few grammer and capitalization mistakes. Those distract from the overall effect of the poem.
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i knew how u feel !!!
special K*

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