God's art
Lush green meadows
Beautiful butterflies
Sunbeams glisten on snow capped peaks
Lilies afloat on deep blue mountain pools
Hummingbirds drink, sweet nectar flows
Vibrant colored blossoms
Rainbow revealed
God's art
Author notes
Written June 5th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Win another Gold for a Gold! by LadyInRed55.
300 points, ended June 12, 2007, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Form Contest - Rictameter by Seeking Peace.
750 points, ended August 21, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is beautiful, I loved the imagery of this piece, you have done so well to cram it all in such a short form, well done
Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the best of luck
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Poetic Whisperer
Thank you so much for your kind words and for hosting this contest.
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Sweet
very lovely and beautiful!!!
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Lady Red
Thank you so much for the kind words and comments. They are truly appreciated.
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Thank you so much for comment grannyeri. They really are appreciated. I just enjoyed being around this site, it motivates me.
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Congratulations on this gold win. Exactly what the picture shows! Nice to have these form contests that allow us write about certain pictures.
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Thank you so much for your comments ShelleyA. They are appreciated.
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A beautiful write. Lovely imagery and flow. Vivid descriptives. You paint a delightful word picture. Well crafted. Thank you for your entry. Shelley
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Thank you so much for your comments The tie guy. Your kind words are very much appreciated.
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Beautiful
Very good imagery. I can just see the mountain pools and the hummingbirds flying around and drinking up the nectar. Truly it is God's art. This should be a contest winner with the ricameter poem type. Good luck.
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Thank you so much for you comments and kind words Robin Candor. They really are appreciated.
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Everytime I see one of these i say I'm going to give it a shot but have not done it yet. I want to go to where you described. That makes it a great piece if I want to be there. Trying to not offend by reading, commenting and replying due to short time availability. Thanks for commenting on little Kadia's play restaurant the Love House. She read all the comments and is hoping to do some marriage fixin' up for whoever will come. RC
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Thank you for taking the time to readaand comment on my poetry Dixie. Your kind words are appreciated.
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Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. You kind words are appreciated.
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Thank you so much for your kind words granyeri. They are much appreciated.
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I love poems that make me see the beauty in the world
Best wishes in the contest this is a lovely poem, without
the picture you would make me see it in my mind`s eye.
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Outstanding
I would be able to see the scene even without the picture from your wonderful poem. Very descriptive and well-written. I wish you the best in the contest. hugs WolfHeart
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Very lovely interpretation of this picture, you have brought the scene to life through the words you have penned.
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