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Domineering Dance







Voluptuous sensuality oscillating beneath multicolored strobe lights
Sinful thoughts infect the psyche as lustrous flesh spirals about steel
With a lip biting tease, velvety hands gingerly unsnap and release
Luminous ivory columns apparent as red lace slips south in a heap


Visuals of curvaceous hips careening rhythmically accelerate palpitations
Stripping elbow to fingertip remaining olive skin enveloped is revealed
Ample breasts rise and fall as warm restless breaths thrust past sinful lips
Masterfully splayed upon the floor before you swaddled in nature's wardrobe


 


Heated flesh glistens instantly capturing your erotically demanding gaze
Hands slither over exposed flesh, a cunning creature for your pleasure
Salivating with widened eyes as length thickens from carnal cravings
Slowly prowling across the obsidian slick floor like a lioness in heat



Delicate fingertips slip liberating rigid strength from restrictive confines
Creeping to a straddling stance inner thighs drenched in salacious nectar
Erect nipples clasped within ravenous lips as hair is clinched within fists
Hips intoxicatingly descend unto steeled flesh, a primordial erotic dance



Eyes meet in a lascivious gaze as fingernails tread over naked shoulders
Sword sheathed securely within sacred chambers coated in liquid velvet
Dominant hands masterly meter the gyrations from omnivorous hips
Hair captured within forcible fists of bestial carnality unleashed


Wolfen jaws attack sensitive jugular flesh with an explosive fervor
Resonating animalistic cries bellow from half parted quivering lips
Bodies collide in a thunderous crashing of licentious greediness
With an electrifying jolt ovations of rhapsody volcanically erupt





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For My Loving Master, Master Blaze with love


Written June 5th, 2006

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  • Tattboyspet
    September 2, 2007

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    okay, so I take it you have actually done one of these before ... lol - I can tell in your words ... hope you don't mind, but methinks I might me using a bit of this advice in the not too distant future ... well done celtic, this was one that actually DID help me a bit!


  • IamXann
    December 15, 2006

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    Wonderful

    You captivate the mind with your vivdness. It made me sad to see this end, I was glued from the picture until the very end of the poem.


  • Curtkf
    June 6, 2006
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    Wonderful

    Wonderful poetry Celticmoon, Very erotic without being crass. My favorite line “Sword sheathed securely within sacred chambers coated in liquid velvet” is masterful. Excellent job with this, best of luck in the contest.


  • Genuine Solitaire
    June 6, 2006
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    Whoah, that was very well written. very sexy, I like the clip at the top too, fit's very well, but which came first? The clip or the poem? lol, whatever, this was a great write, keep writing and keep sharing, i wish you luck in future poems!

    Kissing


  • Faded silver member
    June 6, 2006
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    I think I'm in love with the girl from the clip.
    I adore the attention you've payed to shape and colour... rather than plunging into the more obvious visuals of erotica. This whole poem is drawn out and teasing
    ~Faded


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 6, 2006
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    Soooo wonderfully sexy, sultry, and erotic, girlie! Whew! I'm sure Blaze's jaw was dropping and his temperature was rising! Very well done! The best of luck in the contest, hon!


  • sarajaneUK
    June 6, 2006
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    Very well written and tastefully done too...don't think my fingernails would be treading over naked shoulders, hehehe, more digging in and hanging on!! Great write. sj


  • Lilith-blackwing
    June 6, 2006
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    strum anew a lovers song , as sirens sing and

    awesome poem . very erotic . i like how you word the poem . the description would turn anyone one. *blushes* i'm actually a shy person myself . but it is written beautifully . i'm jealous that i cannot write that way . it should be published .
    *bows*

    natures fluid embrace , caress innocent silk , relaxing pose of natures blushing rose .


  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 6, 2006
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    Very nice. Very sensual and erotic. Tastefully seductive, what a wonderful job you've done.


  • tinuelena
    June 6, 2006
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    Very nice indeed. The language and grace in this poem is evident and incredible.

    Best of luck in the contest, though I hardly think you'll need it.

    Elizabeth


  • Gwenevere
    June 6, 2006
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    PHEW!!!!! You expect me to go to work after that.Damn Hot I would say.Very seductive but tasteful write.It was great.Good luck in the contest, Ros


  • June 6, 2006
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    good piece ,but the speed of the theme must be gradual not too speedy . i like it .


  • behind a smile
    June 5, 2006
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    excellent poem! your diction is incredible, you are able to choose the exact words to make this poem not only flow nicely but be packed with imagery and sexuality. you avoid any cliches, even while giving an animalistic approach to this sexual encounter, which can be a very difficult task. you also manage to approach this tastefully and with incredible eloquence; maintaining the poetic aspect as well the the erotic. very well done!


  • WolfHeart
    June 5, 2006
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    sexy

    Is it hot in here again? Gosh sakes, no prude here, but I am blushing to my ear tips. You write erotica with flair and panache... I liked the descriptives and the pace. Couldn't be hotter! hugs WolfHeart


  • tomisb
    June 5, 2006
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    If words were rivers of sexual passion then your lover would be awash in more than they could hold. Tom B.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 5, 2006
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    Wow very sensual and stimulating. Very visual images penned. Wonderful gradual building to the volcanic eruption. Masterfully done. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Thanks as well for the great comment on my poem. Jeannie D Hunter


  • DeathsxBelle
    June 5, 2006
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    WOW....very sensual...erotic....AMAZING!! Good luck!


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    June 5, 2006
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    This is very good and highly erotic..I really enjoyed this. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*


  • Celticmoon
    June 5, 2006
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    My Pleasure Master
    So glad you enjoyed it


  • Blazing White Wolf
    June 5, 2006
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    WOW! I am ummm heated to a state of utter speechlessness dance for me all night long this dance is a prelim to future indulgences The strength is stuck in cotton fabric and hurts!! < thank you my lioness this rocks! and more then just simbolically
    love,
    Master Blaze
    Edited on Jun 05, 9:39 p.m. because ''.

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