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Devil





He lurks into lives
When were at our lowest
Destroy all he can




Author notes

i like to write poems about the devil
Written June 5th, 2006

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  • ItalianRebelRoOcker
    July 31, 2007
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    Short but yet so strong and sadly true.Good Write.

    ~Tia~

    GOD BLESS


  • fr0zenteardr0p
    July 2, 2006
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    very true very true


  • EndlessNight
    June 30, 2006
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    This is why I drink a lot. He hates alcohol, therefore he can't possess me. I'm too good for that chump. Nice poem.


  • Jiraiya13
    June 9, 2006
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    i dont belive in the Devil (or God for that matter but this haiku is an excellent example of the devil's essence, keep up the good work!


  • individuality gold member
    June 6, 2006
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    not only when we are at our lowest he can call anytime and tempt us with his wares - spill ink and twist me into the shape of love...

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