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My world is crumbling

My world is crumbling
My final goodbye before my final year
The boxes stacked as if to touch the sky
The stars that I once reached for above a different horizon
My friends, my enemies, my pets too
All left discarded with my memories

Both smiles and mirrors have been cracked
Every window and tears wiped away
Each pet no matter born or buried
They lived a full life here
In my home, in my life
In my love and my friendships
Everyone and thing
Except

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Written June 5th, 2006

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  • Veyri
    July 18, 2006
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    Unfinished, or leaving the reader to finish it for themselves?

    Good poem for endings and new beginnings. *claps*