Hear the bell toll
Stroking midnight's call
Hear the ringing bell
Beckon one and all
Come now my children
Come and you will see
The darkness of your mind
The deep insanity
Come a little closer
Do not be afraid
Step a little quicker
Right into the grave
Let me take your life
I want your empty soul
Give me what I seek
Give up all control
The flames of hell close 'round
Feel the evil burn
Listen now my children
There's a lesson you must learn
Follow one by one
Deep into my lair
Follow to the blackness
As I suck out all your air
Feel your life go limp
Your body fades away
For in eternal hell
Your soul is here to stay
So listen now my children
Hear the bell, it calls
Enter now my chamber
No escape from these walls
Listen long and hard
Hear the tolling of the bell
Welcome all my children
To my land of hell
Author notes
You could say some personal feelings spawned this write.
Note to self: G, B, H
Written June 5th, 2006
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300 points, ended September 22, 2006, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
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You gave a voice to your imagery
which is trickey to do! And you pulled it off without
losing the poetic form! Applaud-Applaud-Applaud!
Very difficult to do! You wrote this cleverly and smart,
and your voice haunted and taunted us upon each line
and verse. You a are a lovely dark mistress of Write!
Excellent job!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen/Seattle : ))
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Thank you for the comments, truly appreciate it. When I write dark, I like to go deep and dark, lol.
Storm
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I love the rhythm that this poem has and the flow. Perfect length and perfectly chosen words.
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Well done with this. I liked the rhyme with it. Kinda has an evil feel to it.
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Yeah that dark side comes out every now and again, lol. Thanks hun
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Yikes sis, brrrr, creepy dark side of yours, enticing innocent souls into the bowels of hell!
Awesome write, again!!! -
I have quite a few dark writes, some just pure fantasy, some realities. Feel free to take a peek. Thanks for your comments.
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Of course, I would be honored. I got a few more creepy ones floating around.
Thank you.
Storm -
can i add you to my friends list you are like amazing i am not even beginning to joke
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Well, damn, I don't want anyone getting he wrong idea. It is NOT about little children, but children as in the soul's of all humans. Just had to clarify that.
Thanks for the comments, appreciate it.
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aww I love this poem the darkness of seeking little children lol..lovely I will be tring to read more of this
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Always more hun, you know that. Thanks for commenting, glad you like.
Storm -
Thank you, I appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Thanks Jeannie, just something a little different. Kinda just popped into my mind. LOL, never said I was all screwed together straight.
Storm -
Now this is dark. I love this stuff.
More More More! lol Keep it going sweety. 
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Class as always, I can never get enough of your work, the pace, the rhyme the theme the imagery, i love it all
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Whoa so dark and chilling. Great writing. Thank you for sharing.
Jeannie D
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Thanks, glad you like.
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lol i love this
damnit i love it
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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