Asleep,
This is how I am.
As I leap into desires...
Hopes, lost, encoded.
The metaphorical language of my soul.
Asleep,
This is how I shall be.
fallen away from the inter.
Lept before these fabs.
Fallen towards you...
Desires, lost, decoded by thoughts.
This metaphorical language leaves me holy.
Asleep,
This is where I am.
As I leap into the forgotten.
The realms of our subconscious.
falling towards myself...
Beginnings, lost, encoded in dreams...
Metaphors - infectious teachings from naught.
And I have been taught,
through thought of fake visions
For I am the visionary,
seen to manifest,
destiny.
Author notes
Written June 5th, 2006
A contest entry
- Why Not? by Hebz.
395 points, ended August 24, 2008, 54 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poetry, Poetry and PreWrites! by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1200 points, ended September 13, 2008, 340 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Truth be told!
This is a beautiful piece that many can relate to I'm sure. There lays truth in your words and you have the confidence to back that.
Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
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Simply amazing
Thnx for entering & Best of Luck
GloriousGift
Heba -
Few worded yet pulling. It's simply written yet it grabs ahold of your attention and ends up amazing you.
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Thanks alot for the comment!
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never did quite deemed as in that aspect, are we precognitized or do we...i'm amazed at your articulation, the weavage of time, "the infectious teachings from naught", all to well, my day of my mind is an exhausted pipe, tired... so i am...long day,
for a excellent piece~
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