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A Dream

It was almost like a dream
the walls were red
the skies were green
unlike anything
that I had known
as if our escape
had gone below
as daring as it would seem
imaginary, yes indeed
this little thought
had become real
one little world
for me to feel.

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Written June 5th, 2006

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