It's coming from the Earth's heart
to color snowflakes and tears,
friendly whispering to Moon,
exploring it's misty shine,
Glittering on the river surface,
on the fish scale and eyes,
sleeping inside the shells,
playing with my hairs.
Hidden in the flowers petals,
caught on the spider's web,
sprinkled butterfly wings,
flute sound in the night.
Floating scent of morning dew,
effused within dreamy clouds,
rushing with waterfalls
to the sea foam lace.
Shining like a fairy soft skin,
knitting it's silky feather,
to be a blowball dream.
Author notes
Written June 5th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- ~ Colour Therapy ~ ...:::Silver:::... (For Collection of Trophies ONLY) by -LilacThOughts-.
300 points, ended June 20, 2006, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Darling Sonja
Mummy this is why
you make me cry
and I love you
for all you do.
Smoosh
Janet -
Darling Sonja
Mummy this is why
you make me cry
and I love you
for all you do.
Smoosh
Janet -
Thank you Mal.
~Sonja~ -
Congrates on your golden cup honey....well deserved......
hugs
Mal -
awe Sonja..I thought I read all the entries.....but this is absolutely gorgeous..sweetie.......I love what you did here....color spills all over this piece.....subtle as the blow ball dream....lol.....wow.....what a line.....cute.....
.....but your talent is glowing ever so grand......love it girlie....
Hugs o lot
Mal
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My dear Lilac, you asked for a color therapy by silver. I tried to lead you into my dream and if you found it to be nice place I am happy for you too. Thank you for this very special and really different contest challenge.
~Sonja~ -
Gosh Sonja this is absolutely beautiful...I got lost somewhere in there like floating in a dream...I didn't want to come back out...
I adore metaphors and you have penned this as though there are none in there, but we know they are...it has such a magical feel to it, but yet, like it's the norm and anything else outside of your poem isn't, if you can understand what I mean lol...
Unusual title, I like it...this contest is getting so hard to judge, I will be floundering...I have taken my time and read all of them, many times over but I am going to have to come to a dicision lol....you have just added to my floundering, this took my breath away
~Lilac~
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Thank you Kevin. We all have our own blow ball dreams. We only need to recognize them at the right time.
~Sonja~ -
TRULY INSPIRING
How I wish something like this would come and give me a wonderful feeling like this. Very beautiful!
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Thank you Lilac.
~Sonja~ -
A warm welcome to my contest Sonja and thank you for your entry ~Lilac~
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My dear Abigail, your comments are always like the best dream and I do not dare to open my eyes. I am glad if my verses are able to touch you and to find a way to your great heart.
~Sonja~ -
floating scent of morning dew
effused within dreamy clouds
rushing with waterfalls
to the sea foam lace
this is a beautifully calm and magical stanza the whole poem shines with a surren quality of peace with some beautiful imagery and metaphors within a floating poem
magical read
abigail*hutg*
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