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Oh, Blades of Earth Grass

 







I. Introduction


Oh, blades of earth grass,
shall I bury you in yet another mountain of words?
Meaningless, tired, boring words
to add to the mountains you've already received? 

How about a thousand words
eliciting false smiles from your blasé moods,
squeezing happy overused utterances
from your dour moss-covered countenances?
 
Words
that burst like uninvited guests
through the front door of our beings
and sink heavily into the sofa of our existence,
sucking in the room's fresh air,
eating all the chips,
and leaving an exhaled stench behind...




 
words, the uninvited guest...




II. Friendship

Oh blades of softly whispering grasses,
Shall I peer past you into the greater beyonds 
in search of a deeper meanings in life?





















 
peering into the great beyond...

Should I trample upon you, blades, 
as I pursue my ambitions,
grasping for more than what you have to offer?
 
...knowing you will bounce back uncomplaining,
like a good friend,
understanding, tolerating, admiring me, 
while I take you for granted,
resting on knowing that you will be there tomorrow?












 
trampling and taking for granted...

Shall I stay for tea,
and call you ‘thee’,
and place you into a body of pretty poetry?



 
for all to see with innocent eyes
to hear soft whispers born in spring 
when the earth-bound scents arise 
to offer health and peace within...

blades of grass in pretty poetry
rustle in your waving seas
reach your fingers to the sky
place all your hopes in me...


 




III. Bonding

Oh, blades of earth grass,
Give me a sign!
Do not let us part
on this unresolved sour note,
for when my search for vain glory is at an end 
I will return with wound and ailment
and look to you for healing and solace;

if not from you, then your seedlings 
who inherit, possess, and carry on your spirit,
for it is a spirit that I have come to know and love...

a world of existence
in womb of dirt
land-dwelling stalked creations of life sprout from mud and clay

vertical entities
quarrelling with the scenery
knowing of the cosmos and heavens beyond my thought…

 

I miss you already, oh earthly blades,
and I haven’t even left yet.
Shall I take you with me?
Can I make you mine? 

can I replace you with a likeness, 
an image of this natural world
sifted through dirty fingers,
dug from a silent, eloquent ecosystem
that I endeavor to comprehend and converse with, 
and only enjoying limited success…

shall I leave
with only the insignificant expressions
of a renewed adolescence raw and green,
the dry sage of sophistication
burning away in cleansing flames
that prepare a fertile foundation for the coming into being
all that arrives with the heavy rains of life
unceasingly beating against the scorched earth of time…
  
 




IV. Desires

Oh, blades, did I tell you that you remind me of someone,
someone who enjoyed my company,
someone who received my purest love.

time… distance… uncertainty... fear...
an unreachable star she seems now…

You, blades, should understand 'unreachable'
as you peer across the lawn at the blades of your desires 
while you are fated to sway in the wind, immovably rooted where you are,
not able to reach your heart's destiny,
lamenting to us that sad song of sorrow in your softly rustling waves…

If I had gently plucked her from the earth
and placed her in my pocket,
She would have died,
just like you would have died in time, blades, uprooted. 
Perhaps if I take soil and replant her,
she will survived…
 

See, around you, blades,
I am imbued with your plant wisdom!

Well, I cannot stay here and steal your wisdom forever, blades.
I must go and interact with the other humans, for I am one,
and that is the world I must survive in.
Off, then, I am, to compete in their world…

Do not look so uneasy, oh blade.
Yes, I am looking at you as we part,
but I am not judging you.
I drink of you in this fleeting moment allotted to us…

Off on a voyage, an expedition,
a journey of exploration,
a quest for some semblance of meaning
outside the geographies of your herbivorous kingdom.
That world is a masquerade, while veiled beneath are the moods and feelings
born of hours mingling within the environs of your habitat…
 

soon perceptions, buried in small sloping knolls
of your scenic countryside, arrive home,
cloaked in the terra firma, speaking of the primordial sludge
contrasting with the glossy thoughts
that roam about your terrestrial surroundings…

 




V. Revolution

Blades of earth grass! I return… and what is this?
You are three-feet high!
Oh, long-haired blades of hippiedom!
A cultural revolutionary now,
standing tall in the midst of a field of revolutionaries!


wild, long-haired revolutionary blades...

Oh, blades, and thy comrades!
What counter-culture statements do you speak?
Letting your stalks grow free…
Gone, the well-manicured lawns
as you fling them into the abyss of their superficial plastic societies,
gone the human control…

What?
is that you I hear screaming, blades?
What is it, blades?
Weeds?
Weeds!
Weeds! Yes, they are a part of this counter-culture,
you will find many wild varieties here.
How they do tend to take over,
and how they strangle you…
Oh blades, how fragile you are! 

A birth of organic dreams alight on an alien panorama
land-dwelling denizens disembark into a realm of visions
the spheres of your wild environs are all consumed
all are destroyed in the path of their unabated comsumption…

 
gone the human control...


OK, blades. I will call in lawn service.
In the meantime, I will temporarily replant you.
Here. A pot. Some soil.
Is being with me less free, oh blades?


lawn service to the rescue...




VI. Nightmare

In the night I converse with you, oh blades,
and the resulting inarticulate mumblings
settle in transient impressions collected from your nocturnal landscape,
inhabiting uneasy hallucinations dangling from flora haunted by dispirited fauna…

Oh, blades, what are in your nightmares?





VII. Passage

I grow old, oh blades of earth grass.
I see you grow old, too, and brittle, getting a little less green there…
a bit thin, and yellowing, kind of droopy...
OK, OK, I will not rub it in,
for I have many wrinkles that you yourself could dwell on...

Shall we pass this life together then, oh earthly blades,
clinging to one another to the last possible moment together,
sharing comfort and understanding?

Destinies intertwined
Blades of earth
Man of universe
 

Or is it vice-versa? I don’t know.
There is much yet to be known,
much yet to be celebrated beyond our time…

A last drink to thee then, oh blades!
(and thy brethren, too!!!)
Such a life we’ve had…
It is over…

We are gone now,
oh blades…
to make room for others...


others...













VIII. Epitoma:

this exploration,  this voyage, 
this journey, this expedition
a discovery, a realization...
 
grasping for images of a likeness
a semblance impressed on thoughts and notions
reflecting concepts and perceptions
mirrored on a cosmic lake
where a single golden blade falling from heaven
lands to float and twirl in the radiant sun…

below, a world of creation and life strewn in randomness
formations and foundations of being
an existence above the ground
dirt and terrain of a land
arguing the close environs of mud and clay
against the sweeping vistas of scenic views …


a close environ arguing with a scenic vista...

lost in the terra firma of this terrestrial globe
imagination caught for a naïve moment
the knowing land-dwelling settlements
alight and disembark, arriving home in a kingdom of visions
twisted in the realm of tiny quarrelsome abodes
swaying upright in the countryside…

swaying upright in the countryside...

disguised within the surroundings
situated centrally amid a natural world ecosystem
mired in sludge born of the heavy rains of creation
seizing insignificant insights and thoughts
plowed into meaningless expressions
once thought perceptive and eloquent
now transformed into an adolescence, raw and green,
while sophistication curls and crumbles in flames
that burn within the habitat of dream-filled spheres…
 

dwelling in a hallucination within your panoramic scenes of alien geography
and masquerading while  within a veil of hidden moods and feelings
remain cloaked in the crude biological birth of your organic speech
that I have uttered with you
oh blades.

 
organic speech...












IX. Secundum:

scenes of alien nightmares
settled in transient impressions collected from your landscape
inhabiting your uneasy hallucinations dangling from flora
haunted by dispirited monstrosities
dwelling within your fears…
  
 

 

what of thee, blades, as the spheres of your wild environs
are ever in a supporting role
for our self-centric importance…
 

being sniffed in a world of existence in your womb of dirt
where your land-dwelling creations of life sprout from mud and clay...

 
sniffed...

a world of randomness
amid formations of beauty
and foundations of being,
being eaten…
 
What? (trying to look innocent...)

riding home into a kingdom of visions
through the realm of your tiny quarrelsome abodes
swaying upright on the Great Plains…
 
yippie-ki-aye...

worthy causes curl and crumble in flames
that burn within the habitat of your dream-filled spheres…

 
we wish this were a dream...

a sunrise,
perceptive, eloquent…
 
Oh, to be a Cocoa Puff...

to become lost
in a sunset over the terra firma
on this terrestrial globe…

 
swaying in the cool breeze of the night...

innate instinct
veiled beneath moods and feelings
born of generations
that have mingled with the eons of your habitat…
 
mmm, grub...

 um, roar...

I am a fox in the tall grass... I hear... I smell... food...























X. Sona si Latine loqueris, oh blades!

 











Author notes

picture credits are contained in their filenames.
Latin Translations:
Epitoma: 'summary'
Secundum: 'after'
Sona si Latine loqueris: 'Honk if you know Latin...'
Written June 4th, 2006

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  • masterblaster gold member
    June 6, 2006
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    Hi, what a super collection of poems from amusing to pensive, a pleasure to read, all the best my friend you made my afternoon more pleasant, hugs Di


  • KirstyAnne
    June 5, 2006
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    lol at Rebeka's comment. I don't mind this. I thought it was extremely well presented. I agree, maybe a little too long, but it was well written. overall, a good write. Congrats!


  • rebeka
    June 5, 2006
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    well, others seem to have enjoyed this but i have this itchy desire to take my lawn mower to it and trim it waaaay down to a more concise read...that first stanza quickly lost my interest, but i stuck with it and plowed through til i got past the weed beds.. then i was walking in high cotton and all the image inserts were kinda wonderful..like wild flowers growing inbetween the grass blades. i do not really get any metaphor here, am i just dense? i kept thinking i was missing something, but i got to the end and thought, huh, it really is about grass! so then i felt like i better read it again...that is when i wanted to get the weed-eater out and get to trimming this beast. hope you wanted my real opinion...try to be as concise in the first stanza as the others...use the word 'blades' less and i think it might be a better read. but what do i know, i even have weeds in my garden.


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    June 5, 2006
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    A very intriguing piece, brimming with imagery, aided by the wonderful pictures you've included. Lots to ponder as I read through this a couple of times. Nicely done!
    Rory


  • Heart Sutra
    June 5, 2006
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    This has some very interesting things going on within it. I enjoyed the colorful changes and your words matched well with everything. Inspiring...


  • Chilko
    June 5, 2006
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    Wow, this one a long one, but worth it. I liked the way you incorporated pictures into the piece, it made things interesting, and the imagery of your words was great as well. Thanks for sharing this piece. Muchas amor, Amanda


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    June 5, 2006
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    Not exactly my cup of tea I thought it a bit to long and rather hard to follow but to each their own.


  • Owlfire
    June 5, 2006
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    This is pure genius! I loved the pictures, and the captions, some of which were funny, some thought-provoking. This brought to mind the evolutuion of the world....


  • MoonHelixEpiphany
    June 5, 2006
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    thank you for the show! i enjoyed everything you had to offer here, i've enjoyed it very much...

    indeed full of wit!


  • wbiro gold member
    June 5, 2006
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    thank you greatly for the feedback, I am sooooo uncertain over this one...
    Edited on Jun 05, 9:36 because ''.

  • Rowan gold member
    June 5, 2006
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    Quite a explicit, and interesting ode to our green friend..this was such a fun read, love the accompanying pics, and the commentary that would veer off, and come back again! This was long, but it almost had to be..it was one of the most philosophical pieces I've ever read on grass..and full of wit.
    I loved it!


  • Madd Hatter
    June 5, 2006
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    groovy

    ew bugs! this is a really neat poem, quite long but worth the read ....never thought to write about grass before, i like it! and the background is really pretty and you have alot of interesting pictures that goes with it! my favourate pictures are of the mouse and fox great job here!

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