Dear Mommy
Hi
You will never know how long
I wanted to say that to you
but I sadly never got the chance
because I was taken from you
life was so good
I was in someplace dark
but I wasn't scared
cause I knew you were there
I could hear your and daddy's voices
you two were really in love
I will never know the meaning of that word
when you guys would talk
I felt totally at ease
I knew I would have a great family
and I would grow up to be strong
You always did everything right
to make sure I was okay
you took your medicine
even though I knew you didn't like it
you ate right and protected me
I could always feel your hand
where I was
I could feel daddy's too
I thought the world was wonderful
until that day
it was normal
until I felt a pain in my chest
it got so unbearable
then before I knew it, I could see you
but I wasn't with you
I was sitting on someone's lap
he says his name is Jesus
he is really nice mommy and daddy
he said that he took me because
he wanted a friend and he thought
I was nice enough...
He says he loves me and
He knows that you and daddy would
have loved me too
I know you would have as well
but I'm here to tell you
I'm okay
My friend Jesus, takes care of me
and every now and then he lets me
take a look at you and daddy
you may not know it
but I watch alot...
now mommy, don't cry
because I'm not there
I'm always there just not physically
I am watching you from heaven
both me and Jesus are
One day you'll meet my friend
till then I shall watch you mommy
Tell daddy I said I love him!
I love you Mommy!
Love,
Your Son!
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Written June 4th, 2006
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I have tears running down my face reading this! It was beautiful!! I lost a twin in January of 1989. They said I had two placentas and everything but the baby was not well formed and they weren't sure if it was a boy or girl. He/she would have been the twin to my youngest son, John, who is currently serving in Iraq. I am so proud of him but sometimes he mentions that he feels the loss and emptiness of not knowing his twin. What a great, emotional and powerful write!! And, I am very sorry for your loss. Just know that he is with Jesus and someday you will see him again.
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First and foremost i want to say i am sorry for your loss! i lost my daughter on Dec. 18, 2004 when i was 6 1/2 months pregnant! This poem made me cry! it was so heartwarming but also very sad! i too wrote a poem about the loss of not only my daughter but also my niece and nephew as well! very beautiful!!
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very heartfelt, i to have lost many babies and i kow that they are with our lord .this is very lovely keep up the wonderful writing god answers prayer ,my son is living proof of that for he was born 15 years and 2 days after my daughter ,i love him dearly god bless and i pray he'll answer your prayers soon wit another child .but he answers in his time not ours ok love to you
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This is a bitter sweet story. The baby never got to be born but he is with Jeus. It is so sad. I hope you can have an angel of your own one day.
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Nice......pretty good. Like what was already said, you should work on the flow of the words. Some of the lines just didn't read smoothly. Great idea. Thumbs up! God Bless.
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Wonderful write
This piece is spectacular, I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It choked me up thou. God Bless. I could the baby talking, very vivid imagery here.
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A touching topic. While there is some work to be done on the flow and rhythm, this piece packs an emotional punch.
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