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Promise To Lie

As your writing it down.
It makes your heart stand still.
You want to sing it out loud.
But you know you never will.
These words never going to sound.
Now wishing our hearts would disengage.
Everyone knows we’re dying now.
Send a letter.. Drop a line …Send me a page.

Your on my mind trying to write it down.
My heart no longer standing still.
Let me sing it out loud.
Promise me you never will.
I promise. Kiss my lies and lay to sleep..
Take your life back brick by brick you grow.

My heart now stands still.
My breath no longer shrill.
Eyes cold like impacted steel.
Scream your pain out loud.
Show me that soon you will.

Hurry we’re falling, Hurry I’m lying
Take away all that matters.
The loneliness grows with you.
Your arms around my body make me ill.
Disappearing into our lies forever..

Hearts no longer fall still.
Breaths exit from frozen lips.
Eyes no longer show what we feel.
Screaming your heart so loud.
Show me the promise that will…

Hurry we’re falling, Hurry I’m lying.
Take away all that matters.
The loneliness grows with you.
Your arms around my body make me ill.
Disappearing into our lies forever..

As I’m writing it down..
It makes your heart stand still..
You want to sing out loud…
But you know you never will…..

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Written June 4th, 2006

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  • Wolf Maiden
    June 22, 2006
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    Very nice rythem I really enjoyed this poem. Good work dear


  • martinezjjoe
    June 8, 2006
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    excellent

    nice write the rythem is excellent