I'm constantly reminded
You are always on my mind
I can't shake you
Never away from my thoughts
Moments pass,Days,Nights
No matter what happens
I'm still Dreaming about You
Just thinking about You
When i see your smile
I can't help but melt
My knees feel weak
The beat of my heart,
Steadily increases
Palms feel sweaty
Try to be ready
You'd think i would forget
Move on even
Yet here i am again
In this constant Drift
Wherever i go
Whatever i do
Your always with me
Though never near
Some days i only wonder
If only you knew
That all my feelings
Are just for You
My heart is for one
I bet you wouldn't guess
This heart has been won
The winner its You
Palms feel sweaty
Try to be ready
I've been waiting
To see if you'd notice
Pondering the obvious
Dreaming of only US
Time flies when you're busy
Then it crawls forward
Only when you're ready
Only when its T i m e
Should i be bold today
Make a move over your way
No, stay put
Rejection, it hurts
This feeble heart wouldn't stand
The pain, the sadness
Just hold my hand
Just stay a little longer
Palms___feel___sweaty
Try____to____be______R e a d y
Heartache here i come....
Author notes
Uhm..If you haven't noticed, i have not written something for a VERY VERY long time. I'm not quite sure how i feel about this peice. I do know its about someone that i have Liked for about Half a Year. I want to move on, i just can't help but Be in Love with him.
Written June 4th, 2006
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- another prewrite contest by BlackRaven9.
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Ahhhh the wonderful feel of love. It tickle touches every part of us. I enjoyed this a great deal.
"Time flies when your busy
Then it crawls forward
Only when your ready
Only when its T i m e"
I would change your typo though from your busy and your ready to you're in both cases. But other than that, oh the feelings in this piece.
Made me feel like a teen again, and that was a LONG time ago.
Thank you. ~Pamela 
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Keep On writing!
that was a great poem.I enjoyed reading it. -
Excellent
that was perfect poem. i liked it alot. good job!
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