The world *bum bum*, is a dark abyss
My mind *bum bum* is drowning
In the *bum bum* darkness
Of this *bum bum* abyss *bum bum bum bum bum*
They're all out to get me
Don't come near me
You can't see
No one but me can see
The hurt
That I *bum bum* feeeel
My heart *bum bum* is darkened and cold
So give me a blanket *bum bum* because this...
Is cold
*bum bum bum*
Author notes
This poem is about how the emos think that they're all alone, the world is out to get them, and everything is dark and cold. Kinda short, btu hopflly I got the point across, any critical comments and suggestions will be welcomed!
Written June 4th, 2006
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I couldn't figure out what was with the "bum bum" but I got it now. xD I'm so slow. Smack me. I really like this background though. It's dark, morbid, and purple...very pretty. The poem is very pretty too. Nicely done.
Love always,
Kristen ♥ -
I hope the bum bum's are drums
Good luck
jess -
this poem elicited an audible "teehee;" no joke. The bum bums added effect, though the background makes it a bit painful on the eyes...
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This is funny because I find that a lot of things that you have written here pretty much covers what a lot of emo songs are all about. Enjoyed it.
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haha this is funny.. one thing though, the writing on the hearts i cnt see and had to highlight. but this is funny and very cliche emo!!
<3Laura
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