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morning sunshine



bright morning in June
sun shining like lemonade
car door slamming



Author notes

Vaseline had nasty accident this morning. Fortunatly no bones were broken! This is our collaberation waiting at hospital admitance.
Written June 4th, 2006

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  • asymmetry
    June 5, 2006
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    does the last line mean going for a long drive? oh. I just read your author's comments. poor Jane. The only bone I've ever broken was my tail bone. It was a mother*****!! I was snowboarding the next day.


  • vaseline
    June 4, 2006
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    dood, thats not funny lol.