I have some dust in my pocket
The same that leprechauns use
And with this special dust
I can make whatever I choose.
The magic will work only once
So I have to think this through
But to make one object only
Will be a very hard thing to do.
My mind's all cloudy with visions
Of fairy's and unicorns too
But I want to wish for something
More special; now wouldn't you?
How about money..that would work
I could be a huge success
Yet..it doesn't last forever
And life isn't 'bout things to posses.
I have some dust in my pocket
The same that leprechauns do
And with my wish I desire
To share all of it with you.
Author notes
I really ahve know clue where this came from I was just thinking about fairy dust, and I came up with this 
But, if I really had fairy dust and I could only make one wish, I really wish that it would multiply that way everyone could have some and then that way they could fulfill there desires and everyone could be happy 
~*Chelsea*~
Written June 3rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Time for a contest - Anything you like. by GoneWithTheStorm.
300 points, ended June 8, 2006, 21 entries
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AWWWWW...CHELSEA I love it!!!!!!!!!!!
It's... touching LOL No realy it awesome!!! I love fairies!!! LOL ( I am one) HEEE HEE TTYL LYLAS
~Dsgirlie~
Candi -
Beautiful poem, Chelsea! Very heart-felt even though you don't know where it came from... I love the theme and it seems really great. One thing I would suggest is try not using the same words to rhyme every stanza with... you used the rhyme "you" (and words that rhyme with you) in 3 of the 5 stanzas. Watch out for that... If you change it, it'll give it more variety. But other then that, I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest
--Tim -
thank you so much for your honesty. It really helps when people tell you exactly what they think about your work that way it can help you learn to write beter. Thanks again.
~*Chelsea*~ -
Hey Chelsea you have penned a lovely story here and a nice wish not to take everything for yourself, but to give others also a part of it. There are a few remarks though... I want to point at you not to write too often the same words. Try to find some alternatives. E.g. "The magic (works) will work(s) only once" and "And with my wish I (will wish) desire". I think you can delete "one" after "the same" in line 2 & 18. In the 8th line you should change "think" in "thing". Keep up the great work though.
Q.
Edited on Jun 05, 9:40 because 'typo'. -
Very nice poem Aura, well done and beautifully penned good luck in the contest
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now now now
I hope that he doesn't read this *looking around quickly* but, thanks for commenting and for the applause! Love ya sis,
*God Bless*
~*Chelsea*~
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Hey Chelsea
This is such a cute poem!!!!!!! I don't know what I would wish for either, although sending Caleb Lane away would be pretty nice
LOL! One thing in your authors comment isn't it supposed to be have? Well Great poem once again. You really need to slow down though its not fair how you write so easily! 
WEll good luck! and 
's to ya.
Kimberly
Edited on Jun 03, 8:44 p.m. because ''.
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