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Our Love

I know that we just meet
but it's you I can't forget
your in my heart my soul
you've become my world

 

They say new love fades fast
But I believe this love will Last
You now live in my mind
in a place I can easily Find

 

I dream your in my arms
I'll keep you safe from harm
I do love you
and my love is true
I do love you
And my love with pass, the sands of time

 

I know I can’t be remise
You’ll feel my love in my kiss
I can’t hide how I feel
You’ll know our love is real

 

I dream your in my arms
I'll keep you safe from harm
I do love you
and my love is true
I do love you
And my love with pass, the sands of time
Our love will pass the sands of time

Author notes

No ladies I'm not off the Market. LOL, I just felt like writing a love song with a happy ending.  Just giving you all a taste of wht you can be in for LOL
Written June 3rd, 2006

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  • Hassanova
    June 5, 2006
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    You know something, some people might actually classify this as your normal everyday love poetry...but to me it speaks a whole different language and it says a whole lot more than just that, cause' eventhough it can possibly portrayed as something simple...it is, indeed. the sweet, simple words when decribing love which makes the gesture so real, true and wholesome...and I think you did an absolutely extravagant and marvelous job displaying your most sincere and true emotions...Because no love can out-class and out-last the clearest picture of the most genuine love anyone can ever see...this piece really carries out the beauty of that deep inner stregth for another...Great job!


  • gullionmar
    June 5, 2006
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    wow what a good poem,hope some day you will find love againlove cowboys lol wonderful poetry


  • z etoile
    June 5, 2006
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    Good job. It is funny what brings us back to the world of poetry. Keep writing it helps to heal the soul.


  • Sunshine Always
    June 5, 2006
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    Lovely words , put together with lots of feelingsand that makes it stand out for me. Enjoyed the read , thanks for sharing...mal


  • Sandygram silver member
    June 3, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    You are too much Charlie. This was beautiful. You are great at these love poems. You should have a contest and look for an AP wife. I am sure there would be many entries. God Bless you. You take care, Sandy

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