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Love and Hate

“Love and Hate”
Desperation.
Confusion.
Nothing can replace
The emptiness.

[Hate the system]

Cut the cord.
Slit some throats.
Play pretend.
Act the part.

[Love the pain]

Sweet resolution
Found in cylinders and white.
The colors blur
In a gorgeous emotion.

[Hate this life]

Kill the emotions.
See the writhing hatred.
Slice some skin.
Forget the others.

[Love no one]

Trip along the path.
Forget your destination.
No one walks with you.
Slip and fall to death.

[Hate this feeling]

Stop your thoughts.
Stop your heart.
Quit this life.
Quit trying.

[Love your death]
[Hate your solitude]

Maybe you should quit trying.

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Written June 3rd, 2006

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  • March 30, 2007
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    good

    u go by alex on here?


  • March 30, 2007
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    u go by alex on here?


  • cheatergirl666
    October 23, 2006
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    dude yet again *sweet*


  • dusted faerie216
    June 5, 2006
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    Alex, I love you. Smile. Bita


  • Trenchmouth
    June 3, 2006
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    Alex this is a great piece, i know this feeling pretty well and i'm sorry for whatever is going on and you can talk to me whenever you need to. i love you hun.
    s and s
    ~Kami


  • cheatergirl666
    June 3, 2006
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    slip and fall into death

    thats a great line...
    i really like your style of writing.

    gina

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