Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Worship

Denial, I need you in denial
Defiled, I’ll leave your mind defiled
My poison, taste my blood so vile
Denial, I need you in denial

Blood of God, sin of man
I let my plague ravish your land
Children die, chaos reigns
Cancer of neglect leaves its stains

You worship me, I taught you well
You hope for eternal life
I stoke the flames of hell
You’re going down, but you’ll pray to me
In the end you’ll love me
And you will see

I’ll take from you what I please
False hope for paradise is your release

[Chorus]
I’ll rape your daughters, I’ll rape your wives
I’ll steal your souls, I’ll steal your lives
I’ll leave your children for the flies
I’ll strip you bare and feed you lies


I’ll beat the sin in till you bleed
I’ll make you beg ; I’ll make you plead
I’ll make you get down on your knees
I’ll  make you  do what I please

'Cause I’m god….
'Cause I’m god…
'Cause I’m god…
'Cause I’m god…

Denial, I need you in denial
Defiled, I’ll leave your mind defiled
My poison, taste my blood so vile
Denial, I need you in denial

My hate is love, my love is hate
Bathe in your tears, deny you at the gates
Smite the faithful in solemn prayer
While mothers cry I count your hairs

You worship me, through my deceit
You pay me homage
At my feet
You are condemned, but you adore me so
You’re already lost
But you don’t know

I’ll take from you what I desire
Then burn you in a lake of fire

[Chorus]

Cuz I’m……I’m, I’m, I’m
I’m God, I’m Christ, Your Lord, your king
You’ll worship me and the hell I bring
You fuck each other, you sodomize
You stuff your faces while the starving die
You love your fate, you need my love
I’ll send you fire and rain on wing of dove
I’ll rapture my flocks with rays of light
And leave your suffering in their plight
As the horsemen come down, tear the earth asunder
Empires topple as the earth goes under
Broiling pits, torment, death
You’ll cry in agony with each breath
I’ve had my fill of your suffering
This is the end that I bring
So worship me, pray to god
My mercy will be your dying sobs

SO
WORSHIP ME!
WORSHIP ME!
WORSHIP ME!
I’LL FUCKING DESTROY YOU
WORSHIP ME!
WORSHIP ME!
WORSHIP ME!
FUCKING DESTROY YOU!
CHRIST KILLS
SO WORSHIP ME!
I’LL END YOUR LIVES OF MISERY
Christ Kills, Worship me you motherfuck!
Christ kills, worship me you motherfuck
Christ kills, worship me you motherfuck
Christ kills, worship me you motherfuck
Christ kills, worship me you motherfuck
Christ kills, worship me you motherfuck

Cuz..I’ll, I’ll, I’ll

[Chorus]
I’ll rape your daughters, I’ll rape your wives
I’ll steal your souls, I’ll steal your lives
I’LL LEAVE YOUR CHILDREN FOR THE FLIES!
I’ll strip you bare and feed you lies

I’ll beat the sin in till you bleed
I’ll make you beg ; I’ll make you plead
I’ll make you get down on your knees
I’ll make you  do what I please

[CHORUS]

'CAUSE I’M GOD!
'CAUSE I’M GOD!
'CAUSE I’M GOD!
'CAUSE I’M GOD!

Author notes

These are lyrics for a metal song. I have a much clearer picture of how the song plays out in my head, including which parts are soft and which are heavier, however, it is difficult to indicat such differences, and likewise, the pace of the song, which varies greatly throughout the piece. Hopefully, not too much is lost in translation, though enough is that I think it severely detracts from the song.

My message in this song is taken from the perspective of God, who I view as an evil and malicious entity that delights in the suffering of man.
Written June 3rd, 2006

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 24 of 24

  • josh-13
    February 7, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Murder, rape, adultry, sodomy, lets look how this is relivent

    Plane crashes into building,
    School shoting takes 5 lives
    Epidemic of deseases from fornication
    Child gets raped
    terriorist bombing kills 15

    it's but the sound of man worshiping his master,

    Satan, the father of all flesh, Which you show quite clear in this poem, satan pretends to be an angel of the light.


  • manoguru
    October 13, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    i had a good laugh reading some of the comments and the offense that people took


  • n e m o
    July 6, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    well thats happy!

  • Alexandra Saint
    June 14, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Yeah, I agree with Anasuya about the posting the muzak if you ever record this.

    This is great. I mean, it's got so much meaning, and it really is expressive of what I've seen of you so far (which isn't much, but still). And it's definately heavy metal material. I don't really like heavy metal, but these are a great set of written lyrics. And it's kind of profane, but so is most stuff these days. That's why I think we should all go back to the 60's, and listen to the Beatles and the Rolling Stones and gawk at Mick Jagger even though he's not much of a looker. And he does a lot of drugs.

    Anyways.

    Nice work on this one, and I was reading the little diologue between you and the other person (deercatcher, I think), and I totally think that person was a prude and rude.

    Kudos!

    Bekca.

  • Nicole Hanna
    June 11, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    I love Christians. They are so entertaining. And sigh... it's just nice to read something blaphemous by you after all this tiem. lol. You've definitely not lost your touch. And now I'm trying to come up with a tune to this in my head and it's just not sounding right. Should you ever put it to music and have it recorded, even from your own bedroom, post a link and let me hear it. See, you see God as evil... I just see him as indifferent. lol.


  • Glacian
    June 11, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Oh, one more thing. You say that I am descending into a state of unintellectual profanity - have you forgotten that I wrote "F!@#! Jesus" going on two years now (1 year, 7 months)? My position actually hasn't changed too much sense then, only I've begun to listen to a lot more music and that music has had an influence on the type of music I myself would make, provided that I had a career in music. You see? my preference to my other poem is called support for my position...evidence, reason. You might want to try those sometime. Oops, is that rude of me, to be snotty about that? Yes, it is, but also keep in mind that I have a point: I back up my position, and you don't. Christians almost never do, if they have any religion-related point, because their religion is BS and they only thing they can back it up with is more BS. Why would anyone respect "faith" - the art of self delusion - and all the petty trappings that come with the firm conviction that you're going to get rewarded for being a sap?

  • Glacian
    June 11, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    "You rant with all the fervency of a true believer. A believer in your religion; your certitude. Your are absolutely sure...You know!!! There is no God... What arrogance. What dissrespect."

    Hey guess what? You know what this is? It's hypocrisy. Why is it that the firm conviction that god DOES exist isn't considered disrespectful and arrogant, by the same token? You claim there that my "certitude" that "God doesn't exist", which is akin to "a true believer" is disrespectful and arrogant. This implies that some quality of being a true believer is itself disrespectful and arrogant: the certainty of one's position. First of all, you're wrong. Certainty about one's position is neither arrogant nor disrespetful. Provided one has sufficient evidence, argument, and reason for their position - which I do - there's nothing at all arrogant about saying there is no God. I am certain there is no "God" if by God you mean Jehovah, or the God of the Bible. I KNOW this. How do I know? Because the existence of such a god is *logically impossible*, in the same manner that the existence of square circles or a married bachelor is. The Bible offers a contradictory account of God; all the attributes given by the Bible, all the discriptions, are not compatible with one another. The definitions of God given by Christians are meaningless or unintelliglbe. Now, I don't know if all gods don't exist, but I don't need to. Gods that remain unintelligible or undefined don't need to be considered in regards to their existence any more than oogleblugs do. Your failure - your lack of capacity or simply your ignorance - to comprehend and to understand my position, yet make judgments of it anyway, is YOUR fault, and the only arrogance there is is YOUR arrogance in presuming to understand and draw conclusions about MY position when you obviously don't even know what it is. That's ridiculous in addition to being downright stupid and presumptuous, so you can go get a magic marker and write "hypocrite" on your forehead, because I'm tired of having to respond to obnoxious people like you reading my work and leaving these comments that show nothing but ignorance, hostility, and a complete disregard for the facts.

    So yes, I am certain there is no Christian God. Why is it disrespectful for me to share knowledge? Is it disrespectful because I'm blunt, or because you find it offensive that I'd disagree with you and be as certain in my disagreement as you are in your view? Why is that any more disrespectful than a Christian's certainty that God does exist? If what you are saying is true - that my position is what you say it is - then to be consistent, you *must concede that firm conviction in Christianity is also arrogant and disrespectul*. I will wait for this concession.

    Finally, so what if I'm disrespectful? There's no rule or law stating I have to be respectful. Of course I'm disrespectful, and as I've stated repeatedly: Christianity, along with many other things, DOES NOT DESERVE RESPECT. I don't respect nazism or racism or pure and unadulterated idiocy, why the hell should I respect Christianity? Because a bunch of delusional crybabies are sensitive about it? Give me a damn break. If Christianis are so strong in their faith, why are they so sensitive about people like me, who criticize them for it? Why are they so unloving of me - their self proclaimed enemy - when that is who the Bible says they should love the most? Why do they demand respect, yet in many cases refuse to respect or even acknowledge the positions of others? I have made it my priority to understand the Christian religion and the nature of belief, yet very few, if any Christians I have made have made any serios effort to understand atheism or the reasons for nonbelief. They have only made a superficial effort, in most cases, to satisfy themselves, but when I ask them to explain the atheist position, they give a weak, faulty account. The same cannot be said for myself and Christianity. I understand it. I was Christian. I used to defend the religion with equal fervency, so don't come here and tell me what you think like you do. There's nothing "Christian" about such a rude post.

    "You have no considerations of the feelings of others."

    Really? Would you like to ask my mother? I'm serious - I'll email you my house phone #, you can give her a call, and ask her whether or not I am considerate. I can also put you in touch with my former church, or give you the screename/email of several of my Christian friends who know me personally and ask them whether or not I am considerate/kind/comapassionate. I don't know what they'll all say, but I'm sure plenty can vouch for me without my asking them to. You won't get the equivical answers you seem to offer here. You don't know me. Perhaps you should realize that the way I debate with Christians online doesn't constitute the entirety of my personality and making judgments - prejudgments - based off such a limited spectrum of my behavior - a spectrum you have selectively filtered only to include the remarks I've made that you dislike - is an instance of unfair judgment as well as a classic case of confirmation bias.

    "You have been warned; I have warned you myself. Your presentation leaves the intellectual and becomes more and more profane... You are in a slide. Grab the rope."

    This is ironic, considering I'm working on a massive research paper that considers the subject of religious faith. Once again, you are viewing only a limited selection of my material. I do not put my technical writing up this site regularly - only a few small pieces. This isn't really so much a site for essays. If you'd like - and I'm being perfectly honest - I can send you the draft and segments of my work on faith, and you can see how "intellectual" that is. First and foremost, before I'm someone who has a liking for heavy metal, I'm a philosopher, and I back my beliefs with hard evidence, reason, and logic, all of which is available upon request - if you make that request, I shall answer. I am no less intellectual or academic now than I have ever been, and your assumptions based on my posting of a few profane songs are simply false.


  • deercatcher
    June 10, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    putrid

    You rant with all the fervency of a true believer. A believer in your religion; your certitude. Your are absolutely sure...You know!!! There is no God... What arrogance. What dissrespect. I've watched you for a while; and that is what you are. Arrogant and disrespectful. I have watched you crash private parties to spew your odius filth over good hearted people. You have no considerations of the feelings of others; you revel in the anarchy you mislabel freedom. The most brazen mantra chanting flower peddling cultist in airports, door to door evangelist have nothing on you when it comes to obnoxious peddling of belief. You have been warned; I have warned you myself. Your presentation leaves the intellectual and becomes more and more profane... You are in a slide. Grab the rope.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 8, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Well this sure took a lot of typing. Hope you really dont feel this way. But we are feel to express our feelings. Well done.

  • Eulb kcalB
    June 7, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    the wording use here was indeed brilliant, very well done!!

    but... as a spiritual person i daresay take offence to what is written here
    i am quite aware that each one have us have dark side to our personality and yours shines through here too well

    not even in jest should we defile our fathers name, i not a religious person by any means yet i do believe in God "The Divine" or what ever term you would use to define him , i find it to be really harsh and crass to say those things

    each one of us have the right to say how we feel yet remember that others will not agree in any means to the choices made


    much light and peace to you
    jamila yadira
    Edited on Jun 07, 6:51 p.m. because ''.

  • Glacian
    June 6, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    No, you don't have to believe in him. Do you have to believe Islam is true in order to hate it? Do you have to believe that black magic works in order to despise its use? Do you have to believe a cult leader's claims about being god to hate what he's doing? No. If you really think you have to believe in the truth of something in order to hate the CONCEPT, then you're the one who's being ridiculous.


  • zillion
    June 6, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    it's funny how different we are. I encourage religion, while you try to destroy it....Lets get married!!!


  • zillion
    June 6, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    but you don't believe in God. You must first believe in him to hate him....don't you think?


  • poisonsilver
    June 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    You know what, you SOB I hate your and your stupid little tarnets against god you are a sad litlte man and you should get some serious help

    LOL

    You know I love you! I'm just mad i didn't get here first! damn it if I actualy paid attention to this sight i would have point to promote it! This is one badass song.. in my head the last part was like a screaming death mettle type but i couldn't really picture the first part.

    oh yea and god, i kill 400000000 infedels, does that mean that i get more vergins when i get to Val Hallah? Or Do I get a choise in who my vergins will be?

    -Your poison


  • chat noir
    June 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    oh, love...


  • pugsleyislove
    June 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    Brilliant

    HOLLYYY FUCKING SHIT! This is so goddamn awesome. No pun intended. It's deep, angry, and fucking brilliant. If this don't become a song EVER I will be so shitty. I loved every single line and tword the end, I wanted to stand up and fucking scream and turn up my music! It was amazing and if I could, I would shake your hand. Well mutherfucking done.
    -Hate

  • Farkas1
    June 3, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Hi

    I have spent 24 years defending your right to believe as you do. Write as you will.

    Farkas1

  • Glacian
    June 3, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Also, I'm not claiming to be God. I'm writing this from the perspective of the "God" of Christianity. It says so in my author comments. I'm an atheist.
    Edited on Jun 03, 10:32 p.m. because ''.

  • Glacian
    June 3, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Yes, but why should I avoid openly offending religious beliefs? Why should I make a case without profanity? The fact that I could is irrelevant. I could probably also make a case without using the letter K, but what would be the point? The whole point is that I AM opposed to people's strong religious beliefs, and I am voicing that opinion. I feel no need to hide this fact or self-censor my writing. I am not writing for the purpose of offending, I am writing my views, which happen to offend large numbers of people - simply by expressing my views, and to censor that or tell me I ought to avoid it is total bull, just as it would be if an atheist-dominated society demanded that people who believe in God keep it to themselves because it offended them. Censoring people because their opinions are offensive, and not because they actually seek to cause harm or incite violence is mindless censorship and I am opposed to it.


  • Glacian
    June 3, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    How do you know I'm not God?

  • shoutuntoGod
    June 3, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Oh my gosh!!! Lets get one thing strait here. YOU ARE NOT GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How dare you say that you are. How dare you.

  • Farkas1
    June 3, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Hi


    Remember I said the weak minded!

    The discussion required would take to long and likely result in an impasse.
    I think you are a gifted writer who could make his case without swearing or openly offending those who have strong religious beliefs.

    Farkas!

    Edited on Jun 03, 10:42 p.m. because ''.


  • Glacian
    June 3, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    In what ways does my song cause great harm?

  • Farkas1
    June 3, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Hi

    We have theological differences. As far as I am concerned songs like this do great harm to the weak minded. As far as the poem is concerned unfortunately, you are very good at writing this kind of material. Your use of vulgarisms however do not add to your message. Bottom line, you write well, your material is questionable to say the least.

    Farkas1

1 - 24 of 24