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rules

you rule my thoughts.


I cant stop thinking about you
about your kiss
about your smile
about your voice
no matter how hard I try
I feel you
even though you are not near
and
I cant stop





you rule my heart.




the way it jumps at
each thought
fill my head
wondering where you are
wondering what you are doing
wondering how you would feel
underneath me






you rule.....







its not enough for me
the memories
the voice on my phone
the smile in my heart that I hold near


I need you with me










you rule my thoughts.



and it is killing me .........





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Written June 3rd, 2006

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  • kay a
    June 8, 2006
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    thank u rich..... but it is actually a old poem that I found in wone of my old poetry books... but thanks for the comment anyway...
    miss u

    kay


  • Lionheart
    June 8, 2006
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    I see you have found someone to occupy your thoughts. Thats great, Kay. I'm happy for you. Beautiful poem!
    Richard


  • DragonFyre
    June 6, 2006
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    Beautiful poem Kay. I glad you are writing again.