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This is not a poem.

AP is dumb.
And MOST of the poetry I read on here,
is
ri-
***-
damn-
dic-
u-
lous!

And makes
no
damn
sense!

You're not a poet,
but more of a comedian
in disguise as a human.

Pour some sugar on me!

Author notes

I'm at work listening to Def Leppard.
Written June 3rd, 2006

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  • June 11, 2006
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    Silly rabbit

    Oh brother...
    This is still so ridickeruths ( << Tigger :-D I love the Tiggersh)
    But you do have a point sugar..
    She wanted to start a minor shit storm and she did just that.
    AND I CAN'T BELIEVE I WAS SUCKERED INTO IT.
    DAMNED YOUS ESCAPED!!!
    lol... good job sweety :-)~


  • sugarstar
    June 10, 2006
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    "52 views this week. 94 total."

    thus proving my previous statement. looks like it's creating quite a stir. good job


  • EscapedinReason
    June 9, 2006
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    dude, look at the views. WHAT THE SHIT!?!?!


  • sugarstar
    June 7, 2006
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    that's because we are apparently two of 3 possibly 4 people on AP that are not completely insane


  • EscapedinReason
    June 6, 2006
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    YOU GET IT!


  • sugarstar
    June 6, 2006
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    hahaha...

  • EscapedinReason
    June 5, 2006
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    i think i've upset the ELITE poets at AP, and I wasn't talking about anything. see what happens when you label something as erotica?


  • EmsandAbs
    June 5, 2006
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    Well this is not a comment...

    I repeat this is not a comment

    But it is

    but you know

    You may have your own little opnion right there...Nice way to put it. But seriosuly. Thta just made me laugh I thouhg you were trying to be funny. I guess it was a lame attempt at som rebellion that you didn't get it out as child.

    -Pinky


  • EscapedinReason
    June 4, 2006
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    i love erotica.


  • Genuine Solitaire
    June 4, 2006
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    Well, everyone's got an opinion, but if you hate the poetry, why are you still here?


  • June 4, 2006
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    You're ri-g*ddamn-diculous! Have a nice day!

    You obviously need some sugar with the yucky taste you put in poeple's mouths! lol.
    You are intitled to your opinion.
    But it is real simple there is a little box in the top right corner. Has a "X" in it. All you gotta do is click that instead
    of posting negative bull-sh*t....
    So in the future be an adult.
    ;-)
    Thank you much!
    Edited on Jun 04, 5:21 because 'misspelled'.

  • Tcf
    June 3, 2006
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    I fuckin agree wit you all the way, im on this site just to piss people off, its hella fun cause they get all so fuckin up in arms bout it,

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