Take this fan I give
Learn from it and heed advice
A truly blessed gift for you
A gift without a price
It brings the hopes and dreams
Locked within it's folds
Just look deep inside
Find the treasures to behold
But promise when you're through
Again you'll pass it on
For someone else will need
This fan to wish upon
So please take this fan
A special gift from me
And with it you will find
All your dreams meant to be
Author notes
Written June 3rd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Chinese Whispers by ea.
300 points, ended June 5, 2006, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for the comments, I apprecaite them
Storm -
Dear StormGoddess -- this is such a beautiful, flowing write. This is so inspiring. Thank you for writing this wonderful poem. I will for sure read your others! Also thank you for the comment on my poem. It was appreciated
Allen -
Thank you Tang, always appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Dear StormGoddess,
You have captured the mystery of the fan with your unfolded words. A beauty!
Tang -
Thank you Jeannie, that truly is a compliment
Storl -
Excellent
Wow you are so amazing. You have such a beautiful and caring heart. This is a wonderful poem so full of hope and inspiration for all. Great job. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Jeannie D
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Thank you for the comment. I do sense the togetherness with this as well. And I agree, it leves us with the hope society might get it all togeter someday. And for the record, I give aa lot of damn.. Appreciate your time in reading.
Storm -
my thanx to you
ok i have been reading each subsequent poem and have been commenting on most. i really feel like crying right now for am seeing a pervasive sense of togetherness and hope that is alien to me. i think perhaps there might still be a chance for society if this ongoing fan is any measure of what people really are thinking. thank you for entering and more so for adding to this.( lol, i wrote the second poem, it isnt my contest, but am glad it is flowing as i imagined it to. the addition of your heart is a great one indeed! thank you especially for sharing with the next one who enters; who i havent even read yet..
you show that you give a damn, and i hope to see a lot more "give a damns" here..
thanx again-
-Bee
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