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Soul Life

Life with out Christ is just death in slow motion.
The heart beats, blood flows, but the soul grows cold
Better I drown in the depths of the ocean
Than my soul die young while my body grows old

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Jesus Christ is my life and my hope!
Written June 2nd, 2006

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    June 10, 2007
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    Great one

    Thanks for entering my contest.


  • Resurrected-heart
    October 25, 2006
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    In reply to WolfHeart
    Thank you my friend. I am truely greatful for your kind comment and applause. I'm flattered that a poet of your calibur appricates my writing.
    God bless you
    RH


  • WolfHeart
    October 25, 2006
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    bril

    Brilliant Christian thought. It could be a greeting card.
    This is one of the best Christian poem I have read. It really touches the heart and tells its wisdom well.

    hugs Wolfie


  • Resurrected-heart
    July 26, 2006
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    In reply to XxSadisticDreamsxX

    Thank you, for the comment, and for the contest.
    God bless you
    RH


  • dendriapyro
    July 26, 2006
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    This is short and sweet and to the point. Great write. Good luck in my contest.

  • Resurrected-heart
    July 4, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment and may God bless you.
    RH


  • Shakari
    July 4, 2006
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    This piece is fantastic, for those who carry your beliefs. I am religious, but not in a Christian form. The Jewish don't believe that Jesus Christ was the true savior. I am sorry if I have offended you in any way. My father is Christian, but I was raised by my mother's beliefs, for if your mother is Jewish, you are supposed to be too. I can see where you are coming from, though I am not as devout as you seem to be. God spreads love and its message throughout the world, no matter what beliefs we take part in. This quote was lovely and I truly, wish you the best in the contest!

  • Resurrected-heart
    June 12, 2006
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    Thank you and God bless you!


  • Paint this Town Red
    June 12, 2006
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    yeah i always say.. nothing can harm me, Jesus lives in me.. it's a good poem, short and to the point. nice one, best of luck


  • yours to hold
    June 4, 2006
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    This is a very well written poem! I loved it! I hope you don't mind, I'm gunna add you as one of my favorites!

  • Resurrected-heart
    June 4, 2006
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    Thank you. I truely appreciate your comment and your applause. God bless you!


  • Hadji Murad
    June 3, 2006
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    Wow;

    First...AMAZING PICTURE! *Applaud*

    Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

    This poem is really deep. The first line captured me and constrained me; it's like this poem emmited some sort of gravity. The lines were really strong and the use of a parodox in line one is just brilliant.

    Great write and best of luck!

    -Nathan


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    June 3, 2006
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    wow, very a great write, and i agree.
    what would life really be like without Christ?
    I for one shall never know.
    your poem is really a eye opener,
    or it should be to many.
    i really enjoyed this and thanks for sharing.


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    June 3, 2006
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    Interesting. It is short and to the point but is speaks many volumes. i rather have a soul then for it to die young. Your body can never grow old as long as you believe.

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