Stereos blasted screaming words of chaos and destruction
While people cried drunken fantasies
&& stumbled and jumped in a form they call dancing
I shoved my way through the crowd
/Girls rumors
& boys sweet lies
buzzing in my ears
Like little bumble bees; annoying and obnoxious
The can of beer I held fell from my hand as someone outside bumped into me
He quickly spun around and I caught the bitter sweet scent of liquor mixed with cologne
Before I knew what was happening, his arms wrapped around my waist
And my body was crushed against his chest
But it felt nice
And comforting
And we started dancing to the beat of the music
He led me out by the pine trees and all I could think about was Christmas
His words whispered in my ear, speaking of beauty and love
And all I could feel was my heart pounding in my chest
As he climbed on top of me
I tried to say no but all I could do was choke on the tears sliding down my throat
He ground his hips against my body
Tainting my now nonexistent innocence
& When he finally left
All I could see was him
And how he smiled at me;
cold and sattisfied,
As he zipped the fly of his jeans
He was a wolf
Preying on girls four years younger who didn't know any better
Preying on those who are drugged with confusion
And drunk on lies
Preying on girls...
Like me
Author notes
I wrote this for a project in English about the book "Speak", which is where I got the title from. Please tell me what you think and like about it!!
thanx 
Written June 2nd, 2006
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wow, i love that book, i just read about 3 weeks ago really. this is an amazing write, i love it. this is amazing... i love your imagery & the way you flowed from one line to the next... it was beautiful but also so sad.
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Wow, I really need to read that book. This is such a wonderful write. It's terribly sad but beautifully written. The story flows perfectly. Okay I'm adding you to my favorites. You're so talented.
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that's like an OMG book.. I loved it. my friend Sean got me to read it.. and it's just amazing.
You did a WONDERFUL job of describing how she felt.
I just want you to know know that this piece is just amazing
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ohhh wow
this is wonderful
it definitely does justice to the book
captures something really painful but makes it beautiful all the same.
the imagery about the wolf, the predator, stealing innocence.. so powerful.
i love
xx
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i never read that book....always meant too.
but i really like this. great imagery.
great write.
<3
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omgomg!! I love that book/movie!!!
it's one of my very favorites.
I wrote a poem about this book too
allpoetry.com/Poem/2113596
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I like this a lot.. more specifically the beginning. I love the storyline to it && everything.
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I loved that book and I totally saw everything through you poem. It was so perfect. And I liked it better then how it was written in the book. This style was powerful and even more descripted. I could feel everything, I saw everything. Get imagery.
Always and Forever,
~Kendal -
It sounds as though you write from personal experience so if it isn't this was written quite well as to lead the reader into believing it really happend! Much props!
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Girl, I fucking LOVED this. Everything you wrote was just totally real. Man, I've run into so many guys like that at shows so it's amazing to be able to indetify with you.
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oh my word. this is SO awesome. i can't even pick a favorite part because its all so amazing. great job!!!
~sam
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wow, bewtiful, tragic and true.
"/Girls rumors
& boys sweet lies
buzzing in my ears
Like little bumble bees; annoying and obnoxious" - i ,33 that bit , rele great.
The flow of this is fantastic too, and all the feeling behind it, i <3333 the bit about Christmas, thats awesome, v clever and rele innocent... very good.
Great poem dolly <33it <3ya x-Con-x -
"He led me out by the pine trees and all I could think about was Christmas"
Thats my favorite line! its awesome. I loved that book.
<3Gracie -
I am so glad you posted this!
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i love it.. really great write huny..
the ending has a great pace.. like he's there and then he sitn, as in the poem. so that's really well written.
i love the beginning, great writing
all my love and huggles
jess
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