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Out of the golden dawn

OUT OF THE GOLDEN DAWN
Out of the golden dawn
comes The Princess of the Thrones of the Air,
    bringing the Mayan Codex to Huitzilopochtli...
The Blue Hummingbird on the Left.
    to ensorcel Quetzalcoatl
of the Heavens and the Stars.
    Giving succor to Chedolaomer and his confederates
as they smote the Rephaim in Ashtaroth,
    east of the Jordan river,
Where Og The King was slain by Moses
    at the entrance of The Promised Land...
now, here's old Freddie from the wireworks,
    all drunk and ready with the fireworks...

Author notes

the artwork is original me...if you don't know the entities involved in my poem, Google them...learn!
Written June 2nd, 2006

A contest entry

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  • HeavenonEarth
    June 17, 2006
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    Just back around while I'm getting close to awarding dear friend..Once again Thank you for your entry and your own art and no didn't have to google

    Joy


  • Zev
    June 2, 2006
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    eye yam


  • Tainted Innocence
    June 2, 2006
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    This is beautiful written down...but even better when read aloud. I wanna be an Aztec sooooooo bad! And you can be Mayan.