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death defying

death is a sign of love
murder is heartbroken
break like glass
shatter into revenge
pierce the heart
destroy love
just for you
glaze earth with hate
show your hatred towards heartbreak
devour the substance thats caled "true love"
for your blood is black with heart break
die and be a hellbound angel
dont care about your lack of forgiveness
destroy,conquer,die.

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Written June 2nd, 2006

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  • AudreyTyler
    June 5, 2006
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    OoOoo, I really like this. Normally I don't like love and death comparisons so much but this is really excellent. I like the line, "glaze earth with hate". Very clever. There's just something aboutu the overall feel. Very nice. Keep penning, thank you for entering my contest, and good luck.