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Didn't Care

When I believe in things unseen.
I never thought you'd be the one for me.
I took one look inside my heart,
And realized why we part.

I didn't know where I was going...
I didn't know where I was from.
I didn't care about anything...
As long as we were happy.

Everything is just a blur,
It seems like you don't care.
What we had wont come around,
Not in a million years...

I didn't know where I was going...
I didn't know where I was from.
I didn't care about anything...
As long as we were happy.

I know you never cared...
I wasted my time on you.
Just remember this as your out walking...
I died for you...

I knew where I was going...
I didn't care where I was from..
As long as you were happy,
Thats all you cared...

Author notes

This is my song...what do you think??
Written March 15th, 2003

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  • JadedWanderer
    December 21, 2003
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    Good, it's really hard to find the beat though, maybe give us some ideas?
    Jade

  • HayHay
    April 5, 2003
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    Well can't belive no body else has commented on this cause this is a great write also and yes it is a wonderful song it would be better if i you could post the beat or kinda tell bout it bue great write
    love alwayz
    ~*Hayley*~