Imagine a world where we could assume
peace as a given
no beasts are burden
life is not taken
kind men have risen
Imagine a world where we could assume
suffer no children
loving words spoken
faith never fallen
hearts can't be broken
Imagine a world where we could assume
no evils hidden
compassion there in
no souls forsaken
all pain forgotten
Imagine a world where we could assume
Satan forbidden
to witness no sin
no darkness has been
hope never beaten
Imagine a world were we could assume
GOD
His will happen
Imagine these assumptions as truths
The Lord is there
WITHIN
Imagine
Imagine
Imagine
Imagine
Imagine
Author notes
God #6
www.deviantart.com/deviation12908106/?qo=4&q=heaven+boost%3Apopluar+age_sigma%3A42h+age_scale%3A5
My imagination seeks a world filled with love and hope. My heart follows happily. Join me?
A big thank you to smOOth 1ne for his editing advice on this write!!! As always, I find your words GOLDEN.
Please do read smOOth 1ne's amazing poetry! You will not be disappointed!
allpoetry.com/poets/smOOth%201ne
Blessings! Tammy
Written June 1st, 2006
A contest entry
- **Christian Contest** by WhollySurrendered.
400 points, ended February 22, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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excellent job. i like how the word imagine fades out at the end. it adds to the impact.
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I'm looking through your mind and feeling what you feel through imagination, and I see all that you see through this fantastic write...if only it wasn't just in our imagination, then the world would be the most perfect place...so, as it is, the only perfect place is heaven...
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I just have to say though that your writing is creative, and I like the way you have penned this one, very eye catching, and filled with hope...a strong message carried on your words, a super poem and glad I got the chance to read it...
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Love and smiles
~Lilac~
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Truly an awesome piece of art this is!
I love the repeating of the first line.... with the follow up lines it's just really awesome.
I wish the world I imagined really existed!
This really is a spectacular piece! Am glad you included it on the reading list!
~Melissa
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Imagine indeed, it would be Utopia! I wrote a poem on a similar theme called "Tomorrows World" I like yours very much, it covers everything we might wish for. Best Wishes.
Ann
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We all would love that type of world where there is only
harmony. I like the layout of this write and especially the
ending. It just sinks into the mind and leaves the reader to
think..excellent write.
Take care
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Awwwe Tammy this is beautiful!!! I imagine, that I'm blessed for reading it!! I love the pic, the poem and the text at the end!!!! This will be one of my many favorites of yours. Kepp up the incredible writng girlfriend!!!! GBY
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A Delight!
Hi Tammy. Imagine... a beautiful heartfelt write and message. Very good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Deep expression of emotion. Excellent word choice rich in image. An uplifting piece with the joy of love and encouragement. A poem hope-filled. Well crafted and a most enjoyable read. Shelley
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Oh, thank you so much!!!
No one writes better than mysticstorm!!! She is golden!!!!
I appreciate your kind thoughts!
I did some serious editing on this poem due to the advice of smOOth 1ne and it made all the difference!
Read him sometime, he's amazing and so gifted.
I wish you happy, health and peace! Blessings! Tammy -
WOW
Well I was going to say something else, like I wish you hadn't beat out mystic for this, yet I read and was mesmerized. Just a fantastic piece well deserving of gold. Such a well laid out and expressed poem WOW! Great job. -
Thank you for visiting my humble words! I so appreciate your kind thoughts and warm wishes.
I consider a compliment from a talent such as yourself a blessing to my heart!!!!
Hope the world is smiling at you today beautiful one!
Much love, Tammy
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Loved It!!
Can I have Your autograph?
What a powerful message You conveyed girly!!
Love this verse You penned and summized from the pic!
Awesome!!
Even without the pic~ Your words stand alone...
but united with Love
Peace spreads and makes the world a better place!!
Thank You for sharing this Masterpiece and
Congratulations on Your well deserved win!!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank you Sis! YOU are a ray of sunshine indeed. Your beautiful presence always warms my heart.
Thank you for your kind words...I do so wish to witness this world and often (CONSTANLTY!) pray for exactly what I have penned in this poem.
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Tam,
You are always such a wonderful ray of sunshine. You write with such heartfelt intent of a world of peace and happiness for all. I know you wish for it as many of us do, but you strive for it so deeply.
This is such a wonderfully deep and calming piece. I would love to stand by your side and help you change the world. As we all reach out our hands to each other to form that circle of peace. Hugging the world in it.
Love to you,
my dear sis.
Best to you in this contest and in life! -
What a world to imagine. Great rhyme skill displayed.
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What a beautiful scenerio you have penned here. It is unfortunate that we will never see a world like this, but it is nice to have thoughts of it. Very well done and I love how you graduated down at the end.
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the image is beautiful!
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excellent
it sounds like heaven -
Much love to you girl!!!
Let's yahoo tonight! I'm booked all afternoon.
Hope life brings you lots of love and laughter all day long!
Hugs, Tammy xoxo -
Thank you smOOth!!! I accept and appreciate your advice!! And I have implemented such....MUCH BETTER! Thank you!!!!
You will not believe this....I almost IM'ed you last night to ask you to take a gander at this poem.....but I got sleepy and went to bed. LOL!!! How weird is that?
Your thoughts and opinions are always welcomed on my humble words, sir!
Blessings! Tammy
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yes imagine. great write it really xpresses how much our world isnt perfect but it is possible 4 it 2 b if every1 puts in
gr8 write keep up da good work
rebecca -
Suprised it isn't called 'Imagine' but hey, that wouldn't have been as imaginative (excuse the pun there)
This whole poem is excellent...thought provoking and easy to relate to - well thought out and I wish you luck in the contest!! Blissful Princess
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WOW. Really Thats all I can say...
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Thank you Puppydog for reading and commenting on my poem "Within". Your kind words mean so much to me.
I guess this poem is my dream...my wish for the world in rhyme.
Blessings! Tammy -
A MOST BEAUTIFUL AND SPECIAL POEM
Absolutely beautiful! I am afraid that there is only one place such as that and one day we will see it but for now we have to do what we can here.
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Thank you Pollycheck for reading and commenting on my poem "Within". I so appreciate your kind words. This is my greatest wish for the world spelled out in ink...
Blessings! Tammy -
Many times I have imagined about the perfect world, but I could not have written about it as well as you have. This is a very well written poem.
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Thank you mysticstorm for your comments on my poem "Within". My heart was just wishing and my pen started writing! If only ink could transform the world...
Blessings! Tammy -
I hope most people can relate to this. Our perfect world, hwat wonderful idea and so much of this world could use the change. Very nicely done.
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