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Brain Damage

Hush little baby,
Don't you think!
You can regret it in the morning,
Or another day.

So, for now calm your mind,
And don't let it drift.
Because if you do, all it'll cause
Is another rift.

I can see you're going crazy,
All of the commotion is making me sick.
You're uncontrollable, I'm trying to ease you,
And you're starting to remind me of Nick.

You're wandering aimlessly now,
Going this way then that.
Decide what you want,
And then gather the facts.

Don't try to think of a million things at once,
It all runs together, and then starts to swirl.
You don't have to think about this right now,
Oh God, please stop, I think I'm gonna hurl.

But what am I doing?
I'm just a little girl.
I'm doing all the things I used to hate,
And I think I've fucked everyone but Earl.

Oh, shut up bitch,
Now I'm letting YOU speak for ME.
I have to gain control,
I can do it, best believe.

Now that I'm in a better mind state,
I think I'll go to sleep.
But I have no doubt about it,
You'll be back b/c you ARE me!

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please tell me what you think. It's not one of my best, but okay for considering the circumstances.
Written June 1st, 2006

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  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    June 4, 2006
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    Excellent

    I think it would be much more powerful without the swear words and instead of internet lingo spell out because alot of older folks don't understand the lingo and it can become confusing as well but other then this I really liked it my AP daughter.