Random meeting of two eyes, emerald
Intertwine chocolate, melding their quest
Burning fire of desire in them herald
Primal lust embraced in the dark of night
Beneath her silk robe hidden a divine realm
Glowing skin, adorning gorgeous curves
A sensual goddess of fascinating dream
Her simmering glow blinds his lustful eyes
His ache seen in her soul reflection
Her desire envelops him in her bosom
His hands grope, tracing her perfection
Relishing her treasured golden lissom
The warmth of love floods the horizon
Moonbeams dance within their gaze
Rainstorm of passion pour down
Grains of pearls, swirl in their daze
Her love is the crown he dreams to wear
His lust is the pool she loves to swim
Together they brave the passions roar
Tomorrow will see them still warm
Copyright © 05/12/2006
Author notes
DB loves his B
Written June 1st, 2006
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Once more, more beautiful than ever.
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This is exquisitely done. The form so smooth and just creates a sense of warmth and emotion in the reader. Fantastic piece.
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sexy, sizzling, love
This is pure sensaulity, written very eloquently. You have enchanted us with these wonderful soul warming words. It causes the heart to flutter just a little, and oi give us an beautiful picture of making love. Your talent is glowing,just like them shiny pearls....write ON!..ennovy
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I guess this can fall under erotic something I rather do then read about..lololol
However this was well written and even paced, just enough written to cause this mind to wander!
You are very good at what you do..
I will be back to read more of your work
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zestfully delightful of each and every stanza!
you should certainly win this contest.
Tamara
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Aww! How wonderfully sweet and VERY romantic!! I loved every second of this poem.
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This is really beautiful sweet and romantic. I loved the ending the most. Nice flow and choice of words. It is more of a half rhyme than a rhyme but I like it all the same.
Thank you for sharing this. Keep on writing and good luck in the contest.
Nooni
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