So much to do so little time.
A million and one things running through my mind.
I'm asking questions and the answers I can't seem to find.
Getting our own place.
Another baby coming soon,it all seems like a crazy race.
Getting all this done.
When will I be finished with the battle? When will that moment come.
Starting over it seems to be the same.
How do I keep sane.
Make a list that's what I'll do.
Check it off as I go through.
My head spins all too quickly as I write.
How do I go on and seek the strength or might.
This tangled life makes me a fright.
I search with in and find the energy to proceed.
I do believe I will succeed.
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Written June 1st, 2006
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YOU WILL SUCCED!!!!!Just trust GOD and YOURSELF!Try not to expect from others too much!The power is in YOU!And just look at your talent:your poem is lovely!Write as much as you feel like,whenever you feel like!And having/raising a baby is THE HARDEST JOB on earth...I agree.It creates a real "mess" in your mind and life...BUT IT'S ALSO THE MOST PURE EXPERIENCE you can be blessed with.You learn,step by step,along with your baby, THE SECRET OF LIFE! God bless you!!!
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Aww...
I really love the ending. Such a possitive closure to the poem. You really allow the confusion to show through. I can somewhat relate. There's many times when I feel like there's just too much to do, it's like no matter what, it will never get done! I hate that feeling, and sometimes I don't even know which direction to take a step in to get started... 
Makes me just want to curl up into a ball and wait for the end of the world.
This is a good write though, somewhat like a diary poem. And congrats on the second baby! Must be such a happy time even though it seems a bit hectic. 
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This is very good, but on the last line, there aren't enough sylables. But this is still very good.
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