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Behave

You're the air that I breath
Your the girl that I need
Your that kind of woman that I adore
I lie with you on the shore
The waves gently hit the beach
While we are sharing a peach
You hug me and I feel your tight breast
It feels good to be hit on the chest
That's the world you're diving in
It's deep under my tender skin
You scrape my heart with a desire
You're the one that I admire

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i know the headline sucks
Written June 1st, 2006

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  • Karen Layne
    April 19, 2007
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    nice, sweet.


  • issue
    June 5, 2006
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    thx, i appreciate that u like it it was actually written for a friend of mine

  • Tempa Lee
    June 1, 2006
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    wow this is nice. and i loved your use of words. see ya in the writing bizz.

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  • ang23munchies
    June 1, 2006
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    GOOD

  • SecretMe15
    June 1, 2006
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    sweet.

    aww. that was so nice.

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