If I had the Power of the Wizard
Expert in every spell I delivered,
My chants high, true and quivered ...
I would change the world as we know it
Betwixt and between full of magick,
In the arts and music perfectly prolific
Dignified yet sensuously tantric.
The music room aglow with the moons light
Spherical in shape and lit by the night.
White candles glistening off the polished wood walls
Expertly crafted acoustic from lands of Gaul ...
Every room filled with a different emotion
Wave after wave as high tide of the ocean.
If I had the Power of the Wizard
Expert in every spell I delivered,
My chants high, true and quivered ...
Using the very best of my charm
Noting that here were none to harm
Peering deep within my sacred grail,
I would give strength to the very frail.
Those imparting loud soulful of cries
Due to inhumane treatment and lies,
I would compel them to travel within to realize
That as unconditional, love can truly mesmerize
The species of earth for eternity.
Elixer, medication, the remedy.
Singing emotion the melody
To solve all questions in harmony.
If I had the Power of the Wizard
Expert in every spell I delivered,
My chants high, true and quivered ...
Blessed with vitality of life force
Opportunities join in chorus
In beautific, symphonic intensity
True Spirits of Light and Divinity,
The blackness of hearts would heal
As we learned to give and feel
With a consciousness of one entity
And in so doing achieve validity.
Balancing polarities satiate
The missing pieces as they populate
To fulfill the gap left by emptiness
Light of blue combusts simultaneous.
If I had the Power of the Wizard
Expert in every spell I delivered,
My chants high, true and quivered ...
I would plant the agrimony
Along side her prodigy.
The yellow rose
with white grows,
To remind them of the dark towers
Time moving on without their valor ...
Intimate named sweet flowers
That remain to empower
The minds of unfeeling humans
As master of ancient ruins.
If I had the Power of the Wizard
Expert in every spell I delivered,
My chants high, true and quivered ...
Those filled with anger and greed
In their hearts I'd plant the seed,
To bloom then to blossom completely
Replacing their hatred with serenity.
Once we are all linked as one
Energies aligned moon and sun
Our planet will become paradise
We once shared gracefully to arise.
Dancing,
Prancing,
With those of the noble faery,
To eat, drink and be merry.
In the abundance that strains
All about us in quatrains.
This mine own muse did give to me
To spread the news tenaciously.
Let the magick and the music unfold
Rewards earned ~ to have and to hold.
As I really can change the world
With all the Power of the Wizard!
Author notes
Moon Time
The reason this one is a favorite of mine is first, I really liked the title which is why I read it. Secondly, it takes me to place deep within you that I would not be allowed to see if I had not read this pen. And last, but never least, your rhythm, rhyme and meter were impeccable! You most definately know how to articulate your diction.
Write On!
Blessed Be~
)O(
DragonBlue 
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A contest entry
- My one year birthday fantasy bash! by Dark Otter.
1000 points, ended January 22, 38 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - An Eye for an Eye by BabyBun.
575 points, ended June 23, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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May the Powers of the Wizard be with you! For indeed you know exactly how to use them... Excellent write. The title drew me first. Great piece!
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This poem was a lovely surprise and stands out in my contest for its originality and wit. I love how you want magic powers not for their own sake, but to help others and the wider world. A noble sentiment so brilliantly expressed.
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Wow yes if only we could be like a wizard and change our world to a better place what a wonderful day that would be! Amazing imagery and emotion throughout. I so enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing, hugs Theresa
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I thought the oem was interesting. thought it make a nice lyric since you had a repeating chorus. Congrats on the green trophy. -
I could definitely see why you would like to read this one out loud, it has a great beat to it and an almost musical quality, because of the flow and phrasing. Your word choice really makes this poem work, creating the magical world that your wizardly powers bring about. I enjoyed reading this.
~lost
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Rather long but worth the read ~
I normally nod off when reading long writes but this was intriguing and I enjoyed the thoughts of powers you wished to possess in life
Congrats on the HM
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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fantastic!
Great write, awesome rhyming and imagery. Its almost like a song with your repetition in there. Its done very very very well. If you like to read, i think you would enjoy the auther Daniel Quinn. His 3 most popular are Ishmael, My Ishamel, and The Story of B. Check em out!
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I can definitely hear it being read aloud when I read it. It has a certain musical quality, especially with the refrain. This is pretty epic and original. My favourite lines are: "In the abundance that strains/All about us in quatrains."
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Well Expressed
The sentiments expressed in this lovely poem I go along with wholeheartedly who wouldn't want a better
world for the human race with the shocking state it is in currently,but this poem says it all with elegance
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This sounds more like a song than a poem. This is one I will applaud you for Blue Dragon. Every word you feel hope for a better world. You should definitely do at an open mic poetry slam. Because I would love to see how you would say this poem.
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I wish you well in the contest Would like to be at an open mic to hear you deliver am sure it would be well applauded
with the 'chorus' repetition it keeps the magick link connected throughout without over doing the spell of the wizard. You bring the focus back with you ending. Nicely crafted.
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After I had read this, I read your author notes, and then went back and read it again with an eye for performance - and I can definitely imaging this piece being read dramatically I like the optimism and conviction in your words here - and there is some lovely imagery
Polly
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A contender!
You know me, you know me very well. You know what I like and you deliver that thought with the force of a poetic mage. This poem has a little spell to it and a lot of your magic. Thank you, Dragon Blue for sharing a wonderful part of yourself.
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Very good write ... although I don't quite see how it all connects to twilight :S
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Not bad ...
not bad at all.
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Does that mean you hate it? lol.
Blessed Be~
)O(
DragonBlue
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Ask wakingdevil ...
he says he knows I like it if I say "not bad". I'm a Capricorn, I don't gush (at least not much).
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This is truly a beauty but needs to be 19 lines exactly according to the contest specs. Feel free to post something different, or tweak if you can. I will be back. ~Pamela
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Okay.
It would certainly be very useful if we could have the powers of the wizards to correct those wrongs that have been done. I guess this is pretty true of those that have a few years on them. Anyway it is an interesting POV. I wonder what I would do with the power? Or would I be like Bruce in Bruce Almighty? -
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Who is Bruce in Bruce Almighty? Never heard of him before, but I do live under a rock, most of the time. Thank you for reading and replying to my work and have a great day~
Blessed Be~
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DragonBlue
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Might be a bit long for me, but still a fun read. Lots to think about. The words you chose fit the poem and it was very well written. good job
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Thank you. I have a bad habit of explaining my references with the my poetry at times instead of leaving author's notes and as a result my poems seem to go on and on and on ...But I am unlike anyone I know in the references I use, such as Keltoi which ancient greek for Celtic. Having a Shamanic spiritual path also puts me in a different light in this dimension and most people don't care to understand, let alone read my poetry. So thank you again for enjoying the message behind my many words of petitioning the Power of the Wizard.
Blessed Be~
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DragonBlue
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This was a very good read. I like the flow and the rhyme scheme here. I enjoyed the lines
"The blackness of hearts would heal
As we learned to give and feel
With a consciousness of one entity
And in so doing achieve validity."
Well done.
Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck to you.
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This was very beautiful and descriptive. Thank you so much for writing this, and good luck in my contest.
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Wow! Okay. Long...but really, a very good write. The use of vocabulary is the one thing I noticed first-off, it was great, especially where you say
"If I had the Power of the Wizard
Expert in every spell I delivered
My chants high, true and quivered"
Wizard, delivered, quivered....these are not common words that you see in most poems, great job of improving vocab!
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very good
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