When times past and gone
will you remember my name?
When we grow old and distance
will you remember our game?
when the street we sat upon is old and crumbled
will you remember my voice?
when my heart still remains in pain
will you remember the heartache?
when the phone rings
and the birds sing
will you remember my words?
when my letters fade
and your heart breaks
will you remember my face?
and when I hear your name
I think of our game
I think of your voice
and the pain that was your choice
I remember the phone
and the sidewalk stones
and I close my eyes with insight
and remember that cold winter night.
but when I`m gone
Will You Remember Me?
Author notes
Written May 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- Emotions of Love by KissKissFry.
400 points, ended June 25, 2006, 25 entries
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Damn good
Holy are you a mind reader? O.o;; This was freaky to read because It's all of what I couldn't get out onto paper! It's so brillant. It's as if your poem was speaking from my own heart... I've bookmarked this, and if you want perhaps maybe you'd like to talk? *smiles* Oh! before I forget, good luck in the contest because if I don't win I sure hope you do!
-*AkUmU*-
Edited on Jun 05, 4:53 p.m. because 'I can't spell! T_T'. -
Wow. Its amazing. I love that part "will you remember me?" It crosses my mind a lot nowadays
good luck & thank you!
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