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Emotional Limbo

They think I'm goin' nuts.
"Do you have problems at home?"
But here's the thing I won't tell:
I'm in emotional limbo.

The words won't flow;
I just stare at the page.
I don't feel a thing:
I’m in emotional limbo.

I don't want to break anything,
And I don't want to kill anyone.
At the moment I feel no love.
I’m in emotional limbo.

They're worried that I'll kill myself;
How could I do that?
I have no emotions, not even a glimmer.
I’m in emotional limbo.

The only thing I feel is intense frustration,
Frustration because no words will come;
It feels like I'm in limbo.
There’s nowhere to go:
I'm just floating along,
Drifting on the tide of emotional limbo.

Author notes

this is actually a real event, somehow my guidence counselor got a hold of one of my poems and had a chat with me to ask if i was alright, the only problem was that at the time i had writer's block...
Written May 31st, 2006

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  • changingtides
    June 1, 2006
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    I know how that feels. you put it together perfectly.


  • EndlessNight
    May 31, 2006
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    THEN SMOKE A JOINT, MAAAAANNN!!!! Nice poem too, a poem out of no emotion.