You asked "What is there to live for?"
And I just wasn't sure
Whenever I see you look into my eyes,
I feel myself blush and then I look away.
And when I am scared, you take me into your arms and all fear dies.
You asked "What is there to live for?"
And until recently I wasn't sure
You always bring a smile to my face,
even when you don't say a word.
And again, all my problems disappear without a trace.
You asked "What is there to live for?"
And now I am sure
Do you even realize that I want to be more?
Not just to be friends.
But that I wish someday we could open that door.
You asked "what is there to live for?"
And now I know, the answer is you.
Author notes
Yeah, I don't really like this poem very much. I don't know, I don't think I put enough effort into it, and I don't think if flows nicely. But I decided to add it anyway. lol.
Written May 31st, 2006
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i'm going to go through and comment on EVERY one of your poems right now, if i have enough time anyway probably not but oh well
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very beautiful. loved the ending. something from a love song. not a sappy one, possibly a rock ballad.
keep rockin'
nay
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Wow! I really like this poem! Its very cute. It kinda tells you that theres always something to live for. If its someone, something, or just anything, you just wanna live for it. Once again, I really liked this poem! Keep up the great writing!
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awwe, i really like this one. its really cute, and the way you repeated the "What is there to live for" line and how the line underneath it changed as you went made it super cool. i like it =]] keep it up!!
xx.
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that poem really opened my mind to a new perspective of sight it was awesome
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