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Beginnings (Unfinished)


From every ending,
A new beginning starts...

From every plant killed by fire,
The new shoots
Can grow bigger and brighter,
When spring comes.

From every ending,
A new beginning starts...

For every heartbreak endured,
New love is waiting,
Round the corner,
To be found.

From every ending,
A new beginning starts...

Author notes

An idea sparked from the last two days events. Spending time with three people you feel comfortable with, even when buses going round your roundabout yell at you to get a room ^-^
Written May 31st, 2006

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  • LovelyJourney168
    July 25, 2006
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    i like your poetry. this one especially. it's calming and the message is so clear and so true. i like the way you tied in nature with the human spirit. this is simple lovely and relaxing, and hopeful. wonderful job.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 1, 2006
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    It is nice, calm, comfortable and a true reminder of new beginnings. Very well put together thoughts. Lovely indeed.


  • Decorus Somnium
    June 1, 2006
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    Very good poem,relaxing...nice...lovely Great job!
    Keep Writing
    Blessed Be
    ~MagicalMoon~


  • June 1, 2006
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    this reminds me of an add here that encourages people to save water. i love that add.

    but i love this more.

    great job hun
    Hopeful.


  • BlooQKazoo
    May 31, 2006
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    i like it this is cute and its so happy and hopeful. well done sweetie this is lovely!!
    xxxx

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