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Hope?

Hope?
                                                 I keep hoping for hope,
                                                 But I'm hopeless.

                                 Free?
                                 Freedom isn't free,
                                 And I'm poor.

                       Life?
                       I live on in this life,
                       But I'm lifeless.

             Death?
             Death is my savior,
             But I can't be saved.

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Written May 31st, 2006

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  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    May 31, 2006
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    Well written

    This is full of emotion and very nicely done.
    I too know this and feel very close to the same.