My vernal reflection upon the glass
mystic, smiling alas
My hair that of shining rust
fresh skin, taunt against my bones
Green flecks in my eyes, sparkle bright
as that of a stellar night
My wispy orange curls
hopeful tendrils
shocking against my paper-white skin
marked my words as of within
twinge of mascara, kisses of glitter lip stick
dabs of concealer, concealing my freckled lust
My delicate soul
Not yet rotten of bitter hate
Not yet torn of all things gone and lost
because the smiles
they envelope me like confetti
raining down from a gain
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Believe in maaaaaahhhhagikk baby!
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Written May 31st, 2006
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thisis very sweet. well sad aswell. but i like the imagery and the way you used the words
gd luck in the contest too
~Laura -
A very good write this is, my friend! Wishing you all the best in this contest!
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Gary! Glad you like this! Hey I really should go see your poems..so I will! thanks for the comment..Have a nice one!
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I'm glad to see that all carrot tops are not self-loathing, deprecating, self-styled misfits. I love redheads, I love freckles and they are the spice to the world of cutticles. Very lovely poem full of positive and bright sentiments. I throw you my little handfull of confetti.
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This is really good
Its sweet, i like the lines Danielle mentioned
Good Luck in the contest hun
.:Glitter:.
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